College Stories(Memories of Finn)Q2
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Welcome Back"A collection of Delights/Moments/Stories
2 total reviews
Comment from jmdg1954
I haven't read any previous chapter posted, but I may have to go back and peruse a few to get the gist of your writing and of the story.
I may be able to get into this college life stuff as I have a few stories of my own...
Good read.
John
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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I haven't read any previous chapter posted, but I may have to go back and peruse a few to get the gist of your writing and of the story.
I may be able to get into this college life stuff as I have a few stories of my own...
Good read.
John
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Sounds good to me! There's more to come, and ever so thankful/grateful for the review!
Hope you have a smooth sailing day! Much love.
Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
Well, I see... and I've read it twice to see what's a reader like me can get out from reading your, "Welcome Back," that reminiscent a flashback to an old college years? I like your big font, it's easy to read, but the story line is a bit flat, and most of us college students went through similar situations. Another words, I did not see any major things to the story to leave an impression to the reader(s) like wow or super wow feeling, and sorry for a 4 star because a 5 star take a writer to the excellent level. Although, I wish you all the best!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Well, I see... and I've read it twice to see what's a reader like me can get out from reading your, "Welcome Back," that reminiscent a flashback to an old college years? I like your big font, it's easy to read, but the story line is a bit flat, and most of us college students went through similar situations. Another words, I did not see any major things to the story to leave an impression to the reader(s) like wow or super wow feeling, and sorry for a 4 star because a 5 star take a writer to the excellent level. Although, I wish you all the best!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you so very much! I thoroughly appreciate such a thoroughly written, well expressed review. Totally see your point. Have a blessed day!
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You're welcome, and have a nice day!
