Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your story was so fun to read! I love how you show college life and the small but memorable moments that come with it. I particularly enjoyed the detail about your "secret room" granola bar scenario - it's those little moments that really make this stand out. Did you eventually get your parfait? haha

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024

Haha! Truly!
And sadly I did not. Or at least not that day. In addition to that the school is terrible at issuing refunds. But, although I don't think I ended up writing about it, I don't know if I prefer not receiving my order or finding a strand of hair in my parfait. Like, one of the most ridiculously long strands of hair I'd seen in some time. I guess some events in college, though seemingly mundane, perhaps unusual at times, just fascinates me.

Thank you for your review. Hope you have a smooth sailing day! Much love.

Comment from Catherine Deslippe

Excellent

Lots of interesting and unusual events for your first quarter of College. Great thing you have a teacher who hands out granola bars. See you later stranger, someone either wanted to get to know you more or be a good customer. I really enjoyed reading your writing. Great job and thank you

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024

Thank you so so much! Thankful for that teacher indeed. Granola bars have definitely made their mark on my life at this point, and some events in college, though seemingly mundane, perhaps unusual at times, fascinate me.

Thank you for your review. Hope you have a smooth sailing day! Much love.