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Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed your sentiments in this short, one-line poem. It makes me curious to see the longer piece to which you referred. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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I enjoyed your sentiments in this short, one-line poem. It makes me curious to see the longer piece to which you referred. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Thank you. I would like to publish the entire (short) poem when I get the opportunity. Although I can't take full credit. It is in old english and I think I received it in spirit.
Comment from papa55mike
The true meaning of life is choosing the path to take, but don't forget you can always turn around. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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The true meaning of life is choosing the path to take, but don't forget you can always turn around. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Thank you, When I can I will publish the entire poem.
Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
Honesty, sorry in advanced because sometime it's very difficult to grade, rate or a review. Moreover, I am torn whether the review is based more from the original saying of the author or a borrowing words are ok or not. I thought... it's more like the original words or phrases of the author. From looking at your work, this particular one, it's more like a borrowed artwork because it did not say clearly where the author got it from. Secondly, the phrase of your, "For us determines, come what may," have been used it a lot in daily life already, it's not new and it's not unique saying. It's too common, and it has been used it in works, offices, or in movies, etc... Another words, it's not a unique 6 words from the author, so therefore, I am not sure how to rate it, and I am sorry. We were told to give a review based on a true work, honesty, unbiased, and no favoritism. Anyway, I do wish you all the best!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Honesty, sorry in advanced because sometime it's very difficult to grade, rate or a review. Moreover, I am torn whether the review is based more from the original saying of the author or a borrowing words are ok or not. I thought... it's more like the original words or phrases of the author. From looking at your work, this particular one, it's more like a borrowed artwork because it did not say clearly where the author got it from. Secondly, the phrase of your, "For us determines, come what may," have been used it a lot in daily life already, it's not new and it's not unique saying. It's too common, and it has been used it in works, offices, or in movies, etc... Another words, it's not a unique 6 words from the author, so therefore, I am not sure how to rate it, and I am sorry. We were told to give a review based on a true work, honesty, unbiased, and no favoritism. Anyway, I do wish you all the best!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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I am the author and will post the entire poem as soon as an opening becomes available. Thank you for sharing.
Comment from Neonewman
Brilliantly said, my friend. So much meaning is released in such few words, which is not easily done. Thank you for sharing your talent, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Brilliantly said, my friend. So much meaning is released in such few words, which is not easily done. Thank you for sharing your talent, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much, I will publish the entire (short) poem as soon as an opening becomes available.
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Awesome to hear, and my pleasure.
Comment from Bryce 1
Whatever will come will definitely determine how I will go about my life. I suppose I am quite reactionary in nearly all that I do. Your six words helped me to that conclusion.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Whatever will come will definitely determine how I will go about my life. I suppose I am quite reactionary in nearly all that I do. Your six words helped me to that conclusion.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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I know, too simple to comprehend yet it is true. I will publish the entire (short) poem soon. I believe I tapped into the universal consciousness because it is in old english style. I can't take full credit as it all came to me suddenly with no effort. Wish that could happen more often.
