Who Fell First
I still don't remember9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifteen-word poem, Who Fell First, has the proper word count and seems to suggest that love is not fallen into, but is slowly lowered over you. .........
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This fifteen-word poem, Who Fell First, has the proper word count and seems to suggest that love is not fallen into, but is slowly lowered over you. .........
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
Comment from Katiemae1977
Wis I had a six for this poet. This is definitely one of th f best short love poems I ever read.
You had my vote and best of luck I'm the contest
Katiemae1977
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Wis I had a six for this poet. This is definitely one of th f best short love poems I ever read.
You had my vote and best of luck I'm the contest
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I lovely image to fit the prompt and complement that plunging in together of your love poem. Personally I would be a bit wary of anyone coming on too strong too quickly. It should be a natural, fun understanding. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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I lovely image to fit the prompt and complement that plunging in together of your love poem. Personally I would be a bit wary of anyone coming on too strong too quickly. It should be a natural, fun understanding. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
Comment from lyenochka
That's nice that you both "jumped in together" so it must be that both of you were absolutely in harmony when you both decided that you were the right one for each other at the same time. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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That's nice that you both "jumped in together" so it must be that both of you were absolutely in harmony when you both decided that you were the right one for each other at the same time. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!
Comment from Madeleine Mardis
Patty, this is a great post, it's awwww- inspiring, as in, super sweet! And it's great to hear of a love story, a happy one, in which two people met on line! Way to go! Maddy PS I need to mention, my cellphone is my only device, and there's a glitch in the blind reading, I can see who wrote it. I try not to review these blind kind but sometimes I blunder into it. I reported it to Tom, and he said neither party should worry about it, it's okay.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Patty, this is a great post, it's awwww- inspiring, as in, super sweet! And it's great to hear of a love story, a happy one, in which two people met on line! Way to go! Maddy PS I need to mention, my cellphone is my only device, and there's a glitch in the blind reading, I can see who wrote it. I try not to review these blind kind but sometimes I blunder into it. I reported it to Tom, and he said neither party should worry about it, it's okay.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This a beautiful and simple poem. It is a wonderful tribute to your relationship with your husband. Good luck with the contest and happy writing!!!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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This a beautiful and simple poem. It is a wonderful tribute to your relationship with your husband. Good luck with the contest and happy writing!!!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!
Comment from royowen
It's not easy writing about love in just fifteen words but you've done it, but this is an unusual one, not remember,Bering that you fell in love, but remembering that you fell, heh heh, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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It's not easy writing about love in just fifteen words but you've done it, but this is an unusual one, not remember,Bering that you fell in love, but remembering that you fell, heh heh, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!
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Welcome
Comment from LJbutterfly
I enjoyed this short and sweet expression of love. A good friend of mind met her husband on line. They both felt it was the best thing that ever happened to them. Your poem sounds like you feel the same. That's called, POTENTIAL love at first sight. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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I enjoyed this short and sweet expression of love. A good friend of mind met her husband on line. They both felt it was the best thing that ever happened to them. Your poem sounds like you feel the same. That's called, POTENTIAL love at first sight. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!
Comment from Bryce 1
The picture sheds light on perhaps the day you remember freely jumping in the lake with your lover. What a spellbinding journey this could send the mind off too. You've created a jump pad that springs anyone who reads this into their own realm of romance and love. The free fall flight is fun but the landing is hard, hurts and is supported by reality.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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The picture sheds light on perhaps the day you remember freely jumping in the lake with your lover. What a spellbinding journey this could send the mind off too. You've created a jump pad that springs anyone who reads this into their own realm of romance and love. The free fall flight is fun but the landing is hard, hurts and is supported by reality.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!