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Desert Place

One of Jesus' many miracles

2 total reviews 
Comment from Gunner Lil
Excellent
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Well done and nicely written.
I first heard this passage at catechism class at my Catholic grammar school.
Reading your work brought back memories for this reader.
Thank you for sharing and good luck.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much I am glad it brought back happy memories
Comment from DJ Allen
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I really enjoyed and respect what was said and how. This story was familiar but I've learned new things about it in your essay. I liked your pacing and the story telling along the way with examples! Well done!

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for your encouragement. God bless you.