Comment from
Gunner Lil
Well done and nicely written.
I first heard this passage at catechism class at my Catholic grammar school.
Reading your work brought back memories for this reader.
Thank you for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
Thank you so much I am glad it brought back happy memories
Comment from
DJ Allen
I really enjoyed and respect what was said and how. This story was familiar but I've learned new things about it in your essay. I liked your pacing and the story telling along the way with examples! Well done!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
Thank you so much for your encouragement. God bless you.