My Sister Carol
Gone but never forgotten7 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
At least, vou made amends before she left otherwise
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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At least, vou made amends before she left otherwise
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thanks. I appreciate you reading my poem.
Comment from Bill Schott
This sad poem, My Sister Carol, portrays siblings who went through all those growing interactions that are finally resolved in maturity. The end is sometimes expected, but never fully accepted.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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This sad poem, My Sister Carol, portrays siblings who went through all those growing interactions that are finally resolved in maturity. The end is sometimes expected, but never fully accepted.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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That's true. Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
First off I'm so sorry for your loss. All of the brothers and sisters in my family aside from the two youngest are getting to the age where we might easily slip away too. God, I dread that happening
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that
Are you the one on the right or on the left? The one on the left seems older, but looks can be deceiving.
You wrote a great tribute to her and you should probably give it to her kids although sometimes kids just trash things if they feel they don't have any meaning. Perhaps if you got it framed, they would value it more
I enjoyed reading your poem although It was sad. And your mind is still sad.
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Hi
First off I'm so sorry for your loss. All of the brothers and sisters in my family aside from the two youngest are getting to the age where we might easily slip away too. God, I dread that happening
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that
Are you the one on the right or on the left? The one on the left seems older, but looks can be deceiving.
You wrote a great tribute to her and you should probably give it to her kids although sometimes kids just trash things if they feel they don't have any meaning. Perhaps if you got it framed, they would value it more
I enjoyed reading your poem although It was sad. And your mind is still sad.
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Im the shorter one on the right. Thank you for such an understanding and thoughtful review...lt touched my heart. ❤️
Comment from Lakeshia Richardson
This is the most beautiful thing about the love one has for a sister. I too lost my sister just four short years ago and I feel the pain of her absence every day. I often think about the arguments we had in our lifetime and how meaningless they seem now. I think about how I didn't get one last night with her and if I could how I would revel in all the things that make her wonderful to me. This entry about your sister hit close to home because I know how I felt when God called her home. Thank you for sharing this beautiful entry with me.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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This is the most beautiful thing about the love one has for a sister. I too lost my sister just four short years ago and I feel the pain of her absence every day. I often think about the arguments we had in our lifetime and how meaningless they seem now. I think about how I didn't get one last night with her and if I could how I would revel in all the things that make her wonderful to me. This entry about your sister hit close to home because I know how I felt when God called her home. Thank you for sharing this beautiful entry with me.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you for such a thoughtful review, it means more than you could know. I appreciate all the stars.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet natured poem about remembering your sister and although you suffer grief at her loss, your memories are vivid and comforting, a fine poem for the contest and I am sorry for your loss, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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This is a sweet natured poem about remembering your sister and although you suffer grief at her loss, your memories are vivid and comforting, a fine poem for the contest and I am sorry for your loss, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you, your'e very kind.
Comment from PENofFIRE
This is a sad story beautifully written. How merciful our God is. He allowed reconciliation before her death, leaving you with a sense of peace only God can give. This is a real contender for winning the contest.
May the good Lord bless you and your family richly. Pen
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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This is a sad story beautifully written. How merciful our God is. He allowed reconciliation before her death, leaving you with a sense of peace only God can give. This is a real contender for winning the contest.
May the good Lord bless you and your family richly. Pen
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you, thats very kind of you. I appreciate this thoughtful review.
Comment from BOO ghost
Oh, a Sad poem contest. Reading...looks like an actual photograph.
Now memories are all I have,
of her voice, the things she'd say.
Some pictures in an album,
and the love on that last day. The last stanza. It's sad to lose a loved one, but the spirit is invincible, you will see her someday in the future!
BOO!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Oh, a Sad poem contest. Reading...looks like an actual photograph.
Now memories are all I have,
of her voice, the things she'd say.
Some pictures in an album,
and the love on that last day. The last stanza. It's sad to lose a loved one, but the spirit is invincible, you will see her someday in the future!
BOO!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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I believe that too. Thank you for this kind review.
