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2024 Japanese Poetry

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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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As ever, Gypsy, beautifully and vividly presented to convey the darkness contrasting with the light. Your lovely verse energises and reassures. And is very relatable concerning the lost muse which always goes MIA in the evening and, sometimes for much of the day:)) Thank you and take care Debbie

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Debbie.

    Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Gypsy, This is a poem that many can/will relate to. I'm glad that your muse is coming back to you. Mine flew away like a nomad eagle. Your poem has vivid imagery. I could see the whole scene. Well done. Xo. M

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
    My years off FS were 2016 to 2018, I haven't had a problem since then. I write two poems a day, 24/7.

    Thank you very much, M.

    Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Neonewman
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I for one I'm happy you're back. This is a beautiful piece and yes, depression does cause everything in your system to shut down. Thank you for sharing your Tyler. God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Steve.

    Gypsy hugs 😊
reply by Neonewman on 24-Jul-2024
    My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from lyenochka
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I can't imagine that you are ever without your muse! You always write every single day! You did a great job with your Mondo poem which reassures all writers with writer's block.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
    Last time I was depressed, 2016 to 2018, I didn't write at all, but since I moved in with my daughter and found a good psychiatrist, I haven't had any problem writing, thank God!

    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Love 😊

    Marival ❤️
reply by lyenochka on 25-Jul-2024
    I'm so glad! I know you disappeared for a while. So glad you're back! 💖
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Our muses do seem to come and go at will. Darn things!!! I wish mine didn't wake me in the middle of the night with requests from my characters. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara.

    Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
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i took a long break from posting on here, too!

great mondo poem
thought-provoking question
with an excellent answer...
our muse is always with us
thought sometimes silent...

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley.

    Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from patcelaw
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This is very well written, and I enjoyed the message of it. We all the time seem to have our muses go silent on us. I am glad you came back to fan story after taking it to your break. God bless you and may he keep you safe Patricia.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Patricia.

    Gypsy hugs 😊