Nature
to camp out~ a dear comfort3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Johnny,
This short poem tells us to appreciate nature. It seems mention several outdoor activities here. Camping and hiking among them. Or maybe just sit and view and enjoy.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great weekend.
Joan
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Hi Johnny,
This short poem tells us to appreciate nature. It seems mention several outdoor activities here. Camping and hiking among them. Or maybe just sit and view and enjoy.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
Comment from bonespur
What a great way to interpret the way you perceive nature. It gave me the sense if setting up a tent where you snuggle in a sleeping bag on a rock, etc. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
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What a great way to interpret the way you perceive nature. It gave me the sense if setting up a tent where you snuggle in a sleeping bag on a rock, etc. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your poem really resonates with the way it juxtaposes comfort and adventure. I love how you explore the contrast between the comfort of finding a cozy spot and the challenge of seeking triumph in the outdoors. It's clear you have a deep appreciation for nature and the different ways it can offer solace and excitement. Maybe try tweaking some phrases to make the imagery a bit clearer--like, instead of "The advantage to find a cuddle," something like "Finding solace in a cuddle" might flow better. Overall, it's a thoughtful piece that beautifully captures the balance between comfort and exploration. Keep writing--your voice and perspective are truly engaging!
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Your poem really resonates with the way it juxtaposes comfort and adventure. I love how you explore the contrast between the comfort of finding a cozy spot and the challenge of seeking triumph in the outdoors. It's clear you have a deep appreciation for nature and the different ways it can offer solace and excitement. Maybe try tweaking some phrases to make the imagery a bit clearer--like, instead of "The advantage to find a cuddle," something like "Finding solace in a cuddle" might flow better. Overall, it's a thoughtful piece that beautifully captures the balance between comfort and exploration. Keep writing--your voice and perspective are truly engaging!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024