Reluctant Butterfly
social anxiety7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This sad poem, Reluctant Butterfly, pictures an unsure participant in daily life who feels better and more in control back at home. This is not uncommon, but certainly, kin some, more profound.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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This sad poem, Reluctant Butterfly, pictures an unsure participant in daily life who feels better and more in control back at home. This is not uncommon, but certainly, kin some, more profound.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a very vivid depiction of sadness in your free verse. I like the extended metaphor of the butterfly as it flies from its cocoon to perform its fundamental tasks before returning to safety again. The butterfly is well chosen for its fragility and rather nervous, transient display and perfectly conveys your theme. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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This is a very vivid depiction of sadness in your free verse. I like the extended metaphor of the butterfly as it flies from its cocoon to perform its fundamental tasks before returning to safety again. The butterfly is well chosen for its fragility and rather nervous, transient display and perfectly conveys your theme. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for your review. I appreciate it.
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written poem about things we have all faced in our lives, this is one of those times, my wife bravely faces agoraphobia each day, so she would feel this way, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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A beautifully written poem about things we have all faced in our lives, this is one of those times, my wife bravely faces agoraphobia each day, so she would feel this way, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much--I wrote this many years ago, but when I was working on this posting, I remembered what you'd mentioned about your wife before and did have her in my mind while posting. My grandson also suffers from social anxiety as do I in a lesser capacity so I can relate. Thank you again!
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Well done
Comment from jessizero
I wouldn't have thought of this. It's a very creative take on the "sad poetry" prompt. I am sorry if you really feel this way. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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I wouldn't have thought of this. It's a very creative take on the "sad poetry" prompt. I am sorry if you really feel this way. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much--I've always been shy and self-conscious since a child, but, for some reason, I've always ended up in supervisory/leadership positions having to interact with lots of people and public situations. It's like I have a split personality. I've been able to deal with it, but my grandson has social anxiety as do others I know so I can relate to their feelings.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your poem really resonates with me. I can relate so much to the feeling of stepping out of the comfort of home, like a caterpillar putting on butterfly wings to face the day. The way you describe your daily routines as collecting the "nectars of my life" is beautifully poetic and spot-on. I totally get the longing for that moment when you can retreat back to your cocoon and just be yourself again. It's such a vivid and personal portrayal of the struggle to balance the outside world with the peace of home. Anxiety truly sucks Overall, it's a touching reflection on the daily dance we all do.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Your poem really resonates with me. I can relate so much to the feeling of stepping out of the comfort of home, like a caterpillar putting on butterfly wings to face the day. The way you describe your daily routines as collecting the "nectars of my life" is beautifully poetic and spot-on. I totally get the longing for that moment when you can retreat back to your cocoon and just be yourself again. It's such a vivid and personal portrayal of the struggle to balance the outside world with the peace of home. Anxiety truly sucks Overall, it's a touching reflection on the daily dance we all do.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind words. I'm glad it touched a chord with you. I appreciate it.
Comment from Colorado Owl
This is so sad and lonely... the act we put on every day. You've chosen your words well. I especially like "nectars of my life". I wish everyone had a safe place to go at the end of each day. Thank you!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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This is so sad and lonely... the act we put on every day. You've chosen your words well. I especially like "nectars of my life". I wish everyone had a safe place to go at the end of each day. Thank you!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you so very much for your lovely review--I appreciate it.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I don't know how old you are but back in the day (the forties and fifties) flitting to and from our homes was pleasant to participate, but now... not as much.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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I don't know how old you are but back in the day (the forties and fifties) flitting to and from our homes was pleasant to participate, but now... not as much.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Old enough to remember the enjoyment and excitement of going places and seeing new sights. Then they turn into "chores" and nowadays anywhere can be a worry for one's safety. Thanks for your review.