Truth at Dusk
Revelations as Life's Final Moments Approach8 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Patty,
I like the artwork you chose to illustrate these few words that say a lot.
It seems one always seems to realize their mistakes in life as they are dying and tries to rectify them.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Hi Patty,
I like the artwork you chose to illustrate these few words that say a lot.
It seems one always seems to realize their mistakes in life as they are dying and tries to rectify them.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Thank you!!!
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You're very welcome, Patty.
Joan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this thought-provoking contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. Yes, often we don't fully understand life's truth until death is knocking at our door. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you for sharing this thought-provoking contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. Yes, often we don't fully understand life's truth until death is knocking at our door. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 6 Word poetry contest. This is the way to do a 6 word poem. You have reduced a giant sentiment down to 6 simple words and there are no more words necessary to get your point across. Very nicely done.
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An excellent entry for the 6 Word poetry contest. This is the way to do a 6 word poem. You have reduced a giant sentiment down to 6 simple words and there are no more words necessary to get your point across. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
Comment from Colorado Owl
What a wonderful economy of words! I've never tried to say so much with with so few words. The picture is an excellent choice and makes us stop to think about "life's truth." Very well done!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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What a wonderful economy of words! I've never tried to say so much with with so few words. The picture is an excellent choice and makes us stop to think about "life's truth." Very well done!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!
Comment from gansach
This is a great entry for the 6 word poetry competition. The chosen artwork is a perfect illustration. So much can be expressed in so few words and yours reflect the hope that when our final hour approaches, the meaning and understanding we crave for our lives will be revealed and all made clear. Very profound!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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This is a great entry for the 6 word poetry competition. The chosen artwork is a perfect illustration. So much can be expressed in so few words and yours reflect the hope that when our final hour approaches, the meaning and understanding we crave for our lives will be revealed and all made clear. Very profound!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!
Comment from Sally Law
Patty, a sensational poem in an economy of words. Wonderfully crafted and illustrated in six words. A powerful entry for the contest. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes in the contest.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Patty, a sensational poem in an economy of words. Wonderfully crafted and illustrated in six words. A powerful entry for the contest. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes in the contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh cool six-worder!
powerful, thought-provoking words
formatted with good flow
nice alliteration
may i suggest to s p r e a d out the word "dawn" and center the poem?
Life's truth
d a w n s
at death's dusk
just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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ooh cool six-worder!
powerful, thought-provoking words
formatted with good flow
nice alliteration
may i suggest to s p r e a d out the word "dawn" and center the poem?
Life's truth
d a w n s
at death's dusk
just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!
Comment from patcelaw
This makes a very poignant point with only six short words. We all must come to that time when we will meet death and what is left behind will reveal our truth or our lies. Patricia.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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This makes a very poignant point with only six short words. We all must come to that time when we will meet death and what is left behind will reveal our truth or our lies. Patricia.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!