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Storms

Life changes.

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Comment from Pamusart
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Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

Yeah. I can see the colors within the candle flickering light muted colors.

I'm trying to think of how I would show colors and it's hard to do. It's really hard to do.

Of course the darkness is lack of color. White is all colors combined as darkness is no color.

The candle flame has color around it, and just looking at the flame of the candle color itself

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
    I appreciate your review.
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi
This is a nice spiritual poem about how finding the light of faith gets your through literal and figurative darkness and storms. The candle is a metaphor for the light of faith as well as light to see by.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
    Thank you for getting the association.
reply by dragonpoet on 25-Jul-2024
    You're welcome.
    Joan