Storm Harris
Short Poem2 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
It sounds like this poem is using more than one metaphor going on throughout the imagery, but the predominant one has to do with a very big storm.
We the people must stand together and untied this land from
the storm
I guess you mean 'untie' and not 'untied' to keep the verb tenses parallel. I am not sure how land could be untied. Maybe you can consider 'release' as a verb.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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It sounds like this poem is using more than one metaphor going on throughout the imagery, but the predominant one has to do with a very big storm.
We the people must stand together and untied this land from
the storm
I guess you mean 'untie' and not 'untied' to keep the verb tenses parallel. I am not sure how land could be untied. Maybe you can consider 'release' as a verb.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you for pointing out my typo. I will correct it. Thank you for your kinds words.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This piece has a dramatic and urgent tone that captures the gravity of the situation. It paints a vivid picture of an impending crisis, using strong imagery like "violent storm" and "wrath of destruction." The historical reference to "forefathers" adds a sense of legacy and responsibility. The call to "stand together" and "untie this land" emphasizes unity and action, suggesting that collective effort is crucial to avoid a bleak future. The sense of impending doom and the need for immediate action are conveyed effectively, creating a powerful and motivational message.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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This piece has a dramatic and urgent tone that captures the gravity of the situation. It paints a vivid picture of an impending crisis, using strong imagery like "violent storm" and "wrath of destruction." The historical reference to "forefathers" adds a sense of legacy and responsibility. The call to "stand together" and "untie this land" emphasizes unity and action, suggesting that collective effort is crucial to avoid a bleak future. The sense of impending doom and the need for immediate action are conveyed effectively, creating a powerful and motivational message.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much.