Comment from Patty Mazzurco

Excellent

I really loved your piece. It paints a vivid picture of your ancestors dancing in the northern sky, lighting up a path for you. It feels like a warm, inviting scene as they celebrate your arrival into a beautiful, new world.

The way you describe the northern lights spreading over the fjord is just stunning. It really gives a sense of moving from this world to something more peaceful and otherworldly.

Overall, it's a heartfelt and soothing reflection on family connections and what comes next. It has a calming, reassuring feel to it.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024

Thank you so much

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

This is a pretty poem. I sort of guessed where you were going with it, but that means you did a good job leading toward your ending.

I hope to reach that Pearlgate too. I am a brand new Christian. I became a Christian when I my heart stopped several times and I was brought back. I figured that God had some reason for wanting me to live.

And, I think my purpose is to make people feel good and to help my troubled grandson. He was suicidal a couple weeks ago and now he has some hope

I've done that with other people too people who are depressed

So you did a good job with the descriptive visions of northern skies and so forth

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024

Thank you for your kind words.
Much love, Sam.