The Cake of Life
The trials of life & how we struggle to master life itself.2 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
Life is undoubtedly exhausting, stress causes too many issues in our health. This is an excellent entry for this contest.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Life is undoubtedly exhausting, stress causes too many issues in our health. This is an excellent entry for this contest.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve!
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my pleasure, Skyler
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
For a first post, your poem is a fantastic debut. It creatively uses the metaphor of baking to reflect on life's challenges and the quest for joy. The playful comparison to frosting a cake (yummy)makes the theme engaging and relatable. The positive conclusion offers hope, suggesting that despite difficulties, there's still sweetness to be found. Overall, it's a thoughtful and imaginative piece that sets a great tone for future work. I'm looking forward to more!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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For a first post, your poem is a fantastic debut. It creatively uses the metaphor of baking to reflect on life's challenges and the quest for joy. The playful comparison to frosting a cake (yummy)makes the theme engaging and relatable. The positive conclusion offers hope, suggesting that despite difficulties, there's still sweetness to be found. Overall, it's a thoughtful and imaginative piece that sets a great tone for future work. I'm looking forward to more!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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I truly appreciate your review, Patty! As a young writer (and as a writer in general) I felt delightfully anxious while making my first post on this site (or on any site I should say)! I look forward to posting more, and am elated that you enjoyed my poem.
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Absolutely!