The Primary's Plus One
Blue, Green, and Red + Yellow5 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
We take so many of things for granted, not really appreciating the brightness they add to our day. Imagine everything was gray....
BEautiful picture painted with your words.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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We take so many of things for granted, not really appreciating the brightness they add to our day. Imagine everything was gray....
BEautiful picture painted with your words.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you, l really appreciate this nice review. :)
Comment from T.D. Hoitsma
I really enjoyed this, it took me to a magical place of blooming bliss. I really like the flower and garden settings and the ending to wrap seasons together, nice post!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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I really enjoyed this, it took me to a magical place of blooming bliss. I really like the flower and garden settings and the ending to wrap seasons together, nice post!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you, l appreciate it. :)
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written for the colors contest and I enjoyed very much treating it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a wonderful week and may your day be blessed. ......
..........Patricia.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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This is very well written for the colors contest and I enjoyed very much treating it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a wonderful week and may your day be blessed. ......
..........Patricia.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you, thats very kind. :)
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This poem beautifully captures the soothing and vibrant qualities of nature and colors. The imagery is vivid and evokes a strong sense of tranquility and appreciation for the natural world. To enhance the flow and maintain consistency, consider smoothing out the rhythm in a few places. Additionally, varying the rhyme scheme slightly might add a fresh dynamic to the poem. Overall, this piece effectively conveys a deep appreciation for the beauty and warmth found in nature's colors and seasons. Great job!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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This poem beautifully captures the soothing and vibrant qualities of nature and colors. The imagery is vivid and evokes a strong sense of tranquility and appreciation for the natural world. To enhance the flow and maintain consistency, consider smoothing out the rhythm in a few places. Additionally, varying the rhyme scheme slightly might add a fresh dynamic to the poem. Overall, this piece effectively conveys a deep appreciation for the beauty and warmth found in nature's colors and seasons. Great job!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much for this great review. :)
Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
Hi, I love all of your "True Colors writing prompt entry," from your artwork to your expression about "True Colors," you said it best! So therefore, congrats to the "Exceptional" 6stars! I hope you win this one, :).
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Hi, I love all of your "True Colors writing prompt entry," from your artwork to your expression about "True Colors," you said it best! So therefore, congrats to the "Exceptional" 6stars! I hope you win this one, :).
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you for this wonderful 6 star review...it means a lot to me. :)