The House on the Hill - Play
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Comment from bonespur
When I first started reading your script i certainly didn't expect it to end like it did. You did a good job. Good luck in the contest. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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When I first started reading your script i certainly didn't expect it to end like it did. You did a good job. Good luck in the contest. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your feedback. I am glad you enjoyed the play.
-Tirzah
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You're welcome
Comment from Samantha Wymer
I love it. I can't wait to read what happens next. I can feel the emotions of the characters and confusion. Excellent writing skills and creative mind you have. I feel honored to read such a brilliant minds writing.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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I love it. I can't wait to read what happens next. I can feel the emotions of the characters and confusion. Excellent writing skills and creative mind you have. I feel honored to read such a brilliant minds writing.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for your compliments. I do love to write stories and plays. I'm trying to work on and polish these rough drafts. We will see how it goes.
-Tirzah
Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
Hi, yippie, I get to read your story again (to be continue) in Act 3 Scene 3, "Nowhere Fast." I like it a lot more than the previous one because this "Nowhere Fast" gets to the point faster, friendlier to read, and more easily to digest. I gave a 5stars because toward the its ending, I still feel not a solid clear conclusion to Paul. Perhaps, the author holds to the ending, a final scene with a conclusion of a strong, clear ending, and I'm holding my 6stars for it. Best of luck to this "Nowhere Fast!"
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Hi, yippie, I get to read your story again (to be continue) in Act 3 Scene 3, "Nowhere Fast." I like it a lot more than the previous one because this "Nowhere Fast" gets to the point faster, friendlier to read, and more easily to digest. I gave a 5stars because toward the its ending, I still feel not a solid clear conclusion to Paul. Perhaps, the author holds to the ending, a final scene with a conclusion of a strong, clear ending, and I'm holding my 6stars for it. Best of luck to this "Nowhere Fast!"
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your feedback. (this is the end of the play- as I have stated before, with plays you need to read every scene to understand the ending)
-Tirzah
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You're welcome, and sorry, perhaps, I probably missed something out of your context. I will look into your whole entire story when I have a chance. Till then, have a bless beautiful day! :)
Comment from Teri7
This is another great act and scene you have penned. I hope there is more to this one. You come up with really good dialogue and descriptive words. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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This is another great act and scene you have penned. I hope there is more to this one. You come up with really good dialogue and descriptive words. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your feedback. This is the last scene of this play.
-Tirzah