Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Congrats on your contest win, Sharon! I always try to get to the votes but, somehow, missed this one. A great, fun and rhyming verse which I enjoyed reading and well complemented with the image. Well done again! Debbie

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024

Thank you, l appreciate this wonderful review.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi
This is a witty poem that tells of a person with a lot of ideas and no words to fulfill the challenge. I like the last idea the best. The other have been done too many times before.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of the week
Joan

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024

Thank you so much for this great review. :)

reply by dragonpoet on 26-Jul-2024

You're most welcome, Sharon.
Joan

Comment from zanya

Excellent

A really enjoyable read here where the required words seem effortlessly integrated -as the poet explores a possible theme for a potential book- a great pic

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024

Thank you, thats so kind of you. :)

Comment from T.D. Hoitsma

Excellent

I enjoyed the read, for me it made me think about all the times I could not come up with idea to write about, as if my mind was full of ideas but nothing was making sense. Then all of a sudden everything unraveled and became clear.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024

Thanks so much. It happens to me all the time and can last for days. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I really enjoyed this as I could easily relate to the Speaker who could not come up with the perfect topic for a book. You have used each of the required words very well to tell your tale. Rod

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024

Thank you, it's very nice to hear from you. :)

Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova

Excellent

First off, congratulations on writing something mentioning "death" and "spice" that has nothing to do with Dune.

That being out of the way, I know how you feel. I also get the dreaded writer's block sometimes when I'm trying to think of a fanfic or chapter, and when I do, if I don't want to waste too many days, I will write a poem to keep my fingers oiled.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024

Thanks for this great review.l'm probably one of the few people who hasn't seen Dune. I assume it's something to do with dying and spice? Anyway, thank you for reading my poem. :)

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!


This is a very well written poem. I can tell you that your muse is back in force.

This is beautifully written full of images and a couple of metaphors



I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. :)