My Rainbow
Chromatic associations.5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, My Rainbow, stealthily brings the value of the rainbow colors to the readers without actually naming them. This was well done and a good study in description.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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This poem, My Rainbow, stealthily brings the value of the rainbow colors to the readers without actually naming them. This was well done and a good study in description.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thanks, Bill.
Comment from Barry Penfold
What a clever little put together. The image is great, and you certainly have complied with the contest rules. Thanks so much for sharing. All the best in the contest.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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What a clever little put together. The image is great, and you certainly have complied with the contest rules. Thanks so much for sharing. All the best in the contest.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Many thanks, Barry.
Comment from patcelaw
You have done a very good job of describing the colors of the rainbow with your poems without using the names of the colors at all. It was a pleasure to read it. Your presentation is very well done. I wish you a wonderful day and may God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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You have done a very good job of describing the colors of the rainbow with your poems without using the names of the colors at all. It was a pleasure to read it. Your presentation is very well done. I wish you a wonderful day and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Very generous, Patricia. Many thanks.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your poem offers a vivid and intriguing blend of imagery and emotions. The juxtaposition of contrasting elements--like "fire" and "danger" with "sexy lips," or "luscious fruit" with "gritty pips"--creates a dynamic and engaging effect. The reference to "Ireland's forty shades of hue" adds a cultural depth, while the closing line, "My rainbow all these hues displayed," beautifully ties together the diverse imagery. It's a creative and evocative piece that skillfully plays with color and sensation and keeping to the contest, never mentioning the colors. Awesome!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Your poem offers a vivid and intriguing blend of imagery and emotions. The juxtaposition of contrasting elements--like "fire" and "danger" with "sexy lips," or "luscious fruit" with "gritty pips"--creates a dynamic and engaging effect. The reference to "Ireland's forty shades of hue" adds a cultural depth, while the closing line, "My rainbow all these hues displayed," beautifully ties together the diverse imagery. It's a creative and evocative piece that skillfully plays with color and sensation and keeping to the contest, never mentioning the colors. Awesome!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Lovely review, Patty. Many thanks.
Comment from LeeAnn Kay
YESSSS!!! Don't get me wrong, I love the stuff on this site, but THIS is the type of poetry I came for!! I love it so much, and love to see the use of more than basic words and rhymes.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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YESSSS!!! Don't get me wrong, I love the stuff on this site, but THIS is the type of poetry I came for!! I love it so much, and love to see the use of more than basic words and rhymes.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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So very kind. Many thanks, LeeAnn.