Rainbows in Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "River Swamp"Various forms of poetry
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
You're a descriptive colors add to the mood of the swamp detail. Swamps arabic ethereal and it's looks like you caught on to some of that spirit. Well done.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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You're a descriptive colors add to the mood of the swamp detail. Swamps arabic ethereal and it's looks like you caught on to some of that spirit. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Dear Liz, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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Hi Dove it's nice to meet you. My name is Liz. I just finished my autobiography
I writing a biography about my brother who's heading your TBI so it's a little difficult but it's working.
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Hi Liz, I'm not sure what you meant by "my brother who's heading your TBI" Could you clarify? Thank you Dove
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My voice to text gets really messed up and I meant to say my brother who has a TBI terminal brain injury. That's who I'm writing about in this particular book. What's really sad is he has regressed he was recovering when he was 40, But as he's gotten older and is 77 I think his brain has deteriorated and he is reliving his old stages of recovery such as agitation and inappropriateness .
Comment from Teri7
Donna, this is a very well written poem you have penned for the swamped for life event in Picture this. You used great descriptive words that go well with the art work used. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Donna, this is a very well written poem you have penned for the swamped for life event in Picture this. You used great descriptive words that go well with the art work used. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Hi Teri, thank you for your comments and review. Love and blessings to you too! Donna
Comment from jessizero
Did you write the poem about the picture? I don't know how club challenges work. I think you did a great job, though. I especially liked your first line. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Did you write the poem about the picture? I don't know how club challenges work. I think you did a great job, though. I especially liked your first line. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Hi jessizero, yes I wrote the poem about the picture. Thanks for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, dovemarie
Good luck in your club contest
That scene in your image is haunting; as are your words
I've never liked swamps. I think it's because of the mosquitoes.
Plus, I can't swim. Your poem evoked a sense of.eeriness and also (for me) one of dread. Only because I wouldn't want to go into the swamp
I was at the Saw Hill
recreation area in Florida and it was of course on a swamp because everything in Florida is on a swamp
So I went on those boats to look at alligators Luckily, I didn't fall in
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Good job. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Hi, dovemarie
Good luck in your club contest
That scene in your image is haunting; as are your words
I've never liked swamps. I think it's because of the mosquitoes.
Plus, I can't swim. Your poem evoked a sense of.eeriness and also (for me) one of dread. Only because I wouldn't want to go into the swamp
I was at the Saw Hill
recreation area in Florida and it was of course on a swamp because everything in Florida is on a swamp
So I went on those boats to look at alligators Luckily, I didn't fall in
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Good job. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Dear Pamusart, thank you for your comments and review. Dove