2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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10 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
They definitely are exquisite. I swear, though, that I don't see nearly as many anymore as I used to as a child - and it's not because I'm not noticing.
Anyway, nice ethereal touch with the blonde in the lemon meringue-like dress. Human butterfly!
xoxo
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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They definitely are exquisite. I swear, though, that I don't see nearly as many anymore as I used to as a child - and it's not because I'm not noticing.
Anyway, nice ethereal touch with the blonde in the lemon meringue-like dress. Human butterfly!
xoxo
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Rachelle.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Beauty can resemble the softness of a butterfly. I usually think of a butterfly as the essence of beauty. Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation with us.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Beauty can resemble the softness of a butterfly. I usually think of a butterfly as the essence of beauty. Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation with us.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara.
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Comment from GWHARGIS
This was such a cool poem. At first I thought it was about the woman in the picture, but then I saw the butterfly that was i the same color palette as the lady in the dress. The imagery of the picture captured the meaning in the poem perfectly. Gretchen
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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This was such a cool poem. At first I thought it was about the woman in the picture, but then I saw the butterfly that was i the same color palette as the lady in the dress. The imagery of the picture captured the meaning in the poem perfectly. Gretchen
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
cool pics and and light yellow colour!
wonderful imagistic butterfly haiku
with great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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cool pics and and light yellow colour!
wonderful imagistic butterfly haiku
with great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beauty that is physical is indeed fleeting and delicate Like the wings of the butterfly, it must be admired as long as it nay last, so nany things in life are like that, beautiful, tender and short lived.
RJ
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Beauty that is physical is indeed fleeting and delicate Like the wings of the butterfly, it must be admired as long as it nay last, so nany things in life are like that, beautiful, tender and short lived.
RJ
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ.
Gypsy hugs
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Your welcome
RJ
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Love the way her silky dress resembles the wings of a butterfly and your verse merges the two together seamlessly. Beautiful presentation. Well done, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Love the way her silky dress resembles the wings of a butterfly and your verse merges the two together seamlessly. Beautiful presentation. Well done, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Neonewman
This is a beautiful piece, Gypsy, as is all your work. The artwork makes me think of Fairy's for some reason. Thank you for the educational author notes, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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This is a beautiful piece, Gypsy, as is all your work. The artwork makes me think of Fairy's for some reason. Thank you for the educational author notes, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and very well written Haiku you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from your words and the artwork you chose. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and very well written Haiku you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from your words and the artwork you chose. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Gypsy
When you talk about fleeting beauty, I think you mean the butterfly
I love butterflies. I don't see too many now because I'm homebound and I never go outside hardly. But I remember when I did, it was magical.
below, I think AWAY should go on the same line with butterfly. Otherwise, it gets confusing on checking the syllable count, and it really makes no difference to the flow or syllable count
" and tenderness
take my breath away--
butterfly"
That would have made it easier for me to read
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Hi, Gypsy
When you talk about fleeting beauty, I think you mean the butterfly
I love butterflies. I don't see too many now because I'm homebound and I never go outside hardly. But I remember when I did, it was magical.
below, I think AWAY should go on the same line with butterfly. Otherwise, it gets confusing on checking the syllable count, and it really makes no difference to the flow or syllable count
" and tenderness
take my breath away--
butterfly"
That would have made it easier for me to read
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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No, butterfly is alone in the last line, it's the satori.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Then the next to last line has 9 syllables which is more than the seven allowed for that line
Comment from lyenochka
Ah, those beautiful butterflies do have such fleeting beauty - so many live just a few days - except the Monarchs who live longer if they're in the generation that migrates. Lovely poem!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Ah, those beautiful butterflies do have such fleeting beauty - so many live just a few days - except the Monarchs who live longer if they're in the generation that migrates. Lovely poem!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. Yes, but butterflies are probably content to live a few days.... that's all they know.
Love
Marival