Glowing Moon
A man gets fixated on the moon40 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
The moon has power over many things, the tides especially and peoples moods. This is a beautiful, mesmerizing piece, my friend.
The only thing if you don't mind, I'm not sure the period was meant for here. He stares(.) at the sky
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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The moon has power over many things, the tides especially and peoples moods. This is a beautiful, mesmerizing piece, my friend.
The only thing if you don't mind, I'm not sure the period was meant for here. He stares(.) at the sky
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
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Always a pleasure, my friend.
Comment from Mia Twysted
The moon inspires and captivates many people and it had done again to me through this piece. I love how the moon is with him through out the whole night. It goes where he goes and follows him home.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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The moon inspires and captivates many people and it had done again to me through this piece. I love how the moon is with him through out the whole night. It goes where he goes and follows him home.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from Brenda Strauser
What a beautiful poem. It is so descriptive, positive and uplifting. It is nice to have a positive poem with all the negativity in the world. Very well written. Grear job.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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What a beautiful poem. It is so descriptive, positive and uplifting. It is nice to have a positive poem with all the negativity in the world. Very well written. Grear job.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from LeeAnn Kay
Love this so so much!! Your writing is above average and does a great job of making the reader feel like they're right there in the scene with you!!!!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Love this so so much!! Your writing is above average and does a great job of making the reader feel like they're right there in the scene with you!!!!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
And especially for the shiny stars
Comment from jake cosmos aller
great poem about the moon like the last lines the best
And for each bit of mud we sling
Remember we want the same thing
Let's make our politics to be
That we agree to disagree
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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great poem about the moon like the last lines the best
And for each bit of mud we sling
Remember we want the same thing
Let's make our politics to be
That we agree to disagree
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from Natureschild
Your poem is a beautifully descriptive piece that captures the tranquillity and introspection of a night by the ocean. Phrases like "yellow remnants of sun get deceased" and "a tropical fragrance now floats through the air" are evocative and create a strong sensory experience. The consistent rhyme scheme (AABB) enhances the poem's musicality and makes it pleasant to read. Well done! - Terry
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Your poem is a beautifully descriptive piece that captures the tranquillity and introspection of a night by the ocean. Phrases like "yellow remnants of sun get deceased" and "a tropical fragrance now floats through the air" are evocative and create a strong sensory experience. The consistent rhyme scheme (AABB) enhances the poem's musicality and makes it pleasant to read. Well done! - Terry
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
And especially for those shiny stars
Comment from bob cullen
The image of the moon hovering just above the ocean is fantastic, but your flow of words is even better. They paint a picture every bit as vivid as the photo display. These words make for a magic read and they flow together every bit as good as the image we see. In one word, this is superb.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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The image of the moon hovering just above the ocean is fantastic, but your flow of words is even better. They paint a picture every bit as vivid as the photo display. These words make for a magic read and they flow together every bit as good as the image we see. In one word, this is superb.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
The imagery of this poem is wonderfully evocative, upheld by the picture as well. It provides the emotion of the narrator without being overly explicit as well as the actions. Very nice.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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The imagery of this poem is wonderfully evocative, upheld by the picture as well. It provides the emotion of the narrator without being overly explicit as well as the actions. Very nice.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
And especially for these shiny stars
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely artwork and nice presentation, Pam.
-A well written poem that tells a good story.
-It creates a peaceful mood as his walk
under the full moon brings him some peace.
-A very good, descriptive second verse.
-He begins to unwind as bad thoughts flee.
-I like the line about him hoping the
"moonlight will help him be strong."
-A very good closing verse.
-Very well done; I enjoyed reading it.
**Two small things:
He stares. at the sky, it has helped him.unwind.
[You have a period after stares and after him]
but, they'll be gone soon. [no comma after but]
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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-Lovely artwork and nice presentation, Pam.
-A well written poem that tells a good story.
-It creates a peaceful mood as his walk
under the full moon brings him some peace.
-A very good, descriptive second verse.
-He begins to unwind as bad thoughts flee.
-I like the line about him hoping the
"moonlight will help him be strong."
-A very good closing verse.
-Very well done; I enjoyed reading it.
**Two small things:
He stares. at the sky, it has helped him.unwind.
[You have a period after stares and after him]
but, they'll be gone soon. [no comma after but]
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for pointing out those mistakes
Thank you also for a wonderful review and great comments
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This was an absolutely wonderful poem. So beautiful! The picture you chose was totally gorgeous. Great job, my friend, great job!!!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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This was an absolutely wonderful poem. So beautiful! The picture you chose was totally gorgeous. Great job, my friend, great job!!!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Thank you also for your six star review. It made my day.