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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I can't help but smile at the idea of the moon listening it our stories or better yet, your beautiful poetry being read to it. Thank you for sharing that image with us. I loved reading.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
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This is really captivating, both words and graphics are very well done. Sometimes, something would jump out at you, you know that it means quite a lot immediately, and then the why's come. This reminds me so much of a place I sat with my first time lover, and we read and just hugged. I was 23 years old. Beautiful memory, as she sits and reads.
RJ

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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sitting on the dock of the bay wasting time. . .
my first thought when i saw the title lol--
nice imagery of reading stories to the moon!
cool pics, too!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
    I love that song.

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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How nice! The moon is always a good listener! But she won't talk back so it's hard to know if she really liked the stories or not. Enjoyed the beautiful presentation!

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much for the wonderful review, big sister.
    Have a wonderful weekend!

    love
    marival
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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That image is so watchable and enchanting. And you capture the scene perfectly in your ekphrastic haiku which I enjoyed. Thank you for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Debbie. I appreciate your kind words and excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Did you mean "sitting" as your first word, Gypsy, same as the title?

What a GRAPHIC on this one!! Wowza!

Cool poem, too. I like the visual of reading to tge moon.
Xoxo

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
    Yes, I mean 'sitting'. Thank you!

    Thank you very much, Rachelle. I appreciate your kind words and excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by Rachelle Allen on 19-Jul-2024
    You, too!! xoxo