Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

wow this was a great poem about living life and growing and learning
good form and smooth flow and the required rhymes worked well

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024

Thanks for such positive and encouraging comments, Shelley.
Glad you enjoyed it
Joan

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

The thoughts are true but the piece can use some editing for clarity like in " Every day you and move more " and " And reap what you sow " instead of 'not to reap what you sow.'and " And gossips, how to For not" ??

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024

Hi Tom,
Thanks for the review and sorry about the mistakes. I have made some edits. Maybe you can reread and see if all is find now.
Joan

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I guess you used a near rhyme of "find" and "end" for the last stanza. Your poem flowed smoothly as you told the tale of a person's life from birth to grown individual raising his/her own family.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024

Hi Helen,
Thanks for the review and all the stars. No find was supposed to be
fend. I made that edit and some others.
Joan

Comment from Dr. Nad

Excellent

Thank you for taking the time to write a poem that chronicles the life of all human beings in all cultures. You have nicely shown us the progression from the womb to the tomb. Good job thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024

Thanks, Dan, for the nice review and the high rating. Glad you enjoyed it.
Joan

reply by Dr. Nad on 20-Jul-2024

You are most welcome Joan!