Jealousy
forget the other side of the fence6 total reviews
Comment from Claire Tennant
As usual, this is a beautiful faith-sharing poem that speaks volumes. I love it! To be honest, I do not have any improvement tips.
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As usual, this is a beautiful faith-sharing poem that speaks volumes. I love it! To be honest, I do not have any improvement tips.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
Bravos, I love your Prompt writing, "forget the other side of the fence,"
"Jealousy" messages gear toward all reader(s) with all ages. I have only 5 stars in my drop list, and your worth exceptional. Great words choices, smooth writing, and easily understandable content. Congrats, and wish you win, and your artwork choice speaks for any jealousy in a reality.
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Bravos, I love your Prompt writing, "forget the other side of the fence,"
"Jealousy" messages gear toward all reader(s) with all ages. I have only 5 stars in my drop list, and your worth exceptional. Great words choices, smooth writing, and easily understandable content. Congrats, and wish you win, and your artwork choice speaks for any jealousy in a reality.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
Comment from Catherine Deslippe
Well done, always true, the grass grows greener on the other side. Jealousy was perfectly described in your poem. Although it can be the break to many relationships. Thank you. I enjoyed it
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Well done, always true, the grass grows greener on the other side. Jealousy was perfectly described in your poem. Although it can be the break to many relationships. Thank you. I enjoyed it
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
your poem is well written but it describes envy and not jealousy.
Envy is when you see something others have and you would like to have it. You described it well in your poem.
Jealousy arises when you fear to lose something you HAVE
Eg.
Lose a husband's love because he has fallen for another woman.
You feel doubt, suspicion and mistrust towards your partner , and jealousy towards their love.
Many think envy and jealousy are interchangeable, the same thing so no harm done.
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Ciao!
your poem is well written but it describes envy and not jealousy.
Envy is when you see something others have and you would like to have it. You described it well in your poem.
Jealousy arises when you fear to lose something you HAVE
Eg.
Lose a husband's love because he has fallen for another woman.
You feel doubt, suspicion and mistrust towards your partner , and jealousy towards their love.
Many think envy and jealousy are interchangeable, the same thing so no harm done.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
Comment from Amber Jones
I enjoyed the cautionary tale of poetry that your poem shares. It reminded me of the 10th commandment one shall not covet. Starting with the grass seems greener caught my attention and made me read further. Good luck with your contest!
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I enjoyed the cautionary tale of poetry that your poem shares. It reminded me of the 10th commandment one shall not covet. Starting with the grass seems greener caught my attention and made me read further. Good luck with your contest!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
You did a great job here describing the emotions that accompany jealousy
I think that jealousy is a sin. But I do make a difference between burning jealousy and instantaneous jealousy.
You can't expect a woman or a man to see their boyfriend or girlfriend with somebody else while they're still going out to not get jealous for at least a flash
If it is the burning jealousy that won't go away that I think is the sin. Just like forgive and forget the person who's jealous must forgive the person who hurt them
Who does the jealousy hurt? Only the person who's jealous
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
You did a great job here describing the emotions that accompany jealousy
I think that jealousy is a sin. But I do make a difference between burning jealousy and instantaneous jealousy.
You can't expect a woman or a man to see their boyfriend or girlfriend with somebody else while they're still going out to not get jealous for at least a flash
If it is the burning jealousy that won't go away that I think is the sin. Just like forgive and forget the person who's jealous must forgive the person who hurt them
Who does the jealousy hurt? Only the person who's jealous
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024