Awakened Dream
Cinquain Poem2 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Cinquain Poetry contest. This is a beautiful poem with so much emotion and passion. There is just one thing I would recommend. I had a lot of difficulty reading the font size so I figure others might have the same issue. Try increasing the font by 1 or 2 numbers. If people can't read it easily they will pass on the review. Good luck in the contest,
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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An excellent entry for the Cinquain Poetry contest. This is a beautiful poem with so much emotion and passion. There is just one thing I would recommend. I had a lot of difficulty reading the font size so I figure others might have the same issue. Try increasing the font by 1 or 2 numbers. If people can't read it easily they will pass on the review. Good luck in the contest,
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Thank you kindly for your review. I increased the font and I genuinely appreciate you making my writing more appealing for readers. Thanks again.
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oh that is so much better. You should increase reviews now. Good luck.
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Many thanks!
Comment from Karen Dougherty Estep
This is beautiful! The syllable count is spot on, and I feel the emotion of this verse. Best of luck to you in this contest and in the future. Keep writing!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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This is beautiful! The syllable count is spot on, and I feel the emotion of this verse. Best of luck to you in this contest and in the future. Keep writing!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your review! And confirming the syllable counts because I have made mistakes in the past. Many thanks.