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A Family Tradition

Not all traditions should be followed.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Barry Penfold
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A sad story indeed. Yes, there is always something that tears us apart. You certainly have had a rough time of it. I hope some happy memories temper the hurt. Thanks for sharing and I hope you get a smile out of the day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
    Thank you, Barry, for your kind words and for reading my story. Hugs.
Comment from joann r romei
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

My condolences for the loss of your family, you and your brother were good children who loved their parents, this story held me captive as I feared the worst about your Dad, I heard of several people who died after the vaccine,

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
    Losing so many and having so few left, is hard to live with. Thank you so much for reading my story.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
    Thank you for the six-star review. Hugs.
Comment from royowen
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I don't think you've actually done anything wrong, feeling guilty for being human is no reason, I've been taught that what is past, and the only time we have is this very moment. When grieving is over we move on, I know that our dearly departed would want that, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
    Thank you for your kind words and for reading my story. Hugs
reply by royowen on 19-Jul-2024
    Most welcome
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi Magpie. Nice to meet you

This is very moving. I'm assuming it's fiction. I sort of knew when daddy begged her to stay one more day that if she didn't something drastic would happen.

I don't think Jim's lack of cornbread had anything to do with it

Cornbread is just not something you shoot yourself over

If this is autobiographical, then I'm sorry for your losses

My family is getting to the point where we start dying off. The oldest will be 74 in January and the next oldest will be 73 in December and then I'll be 72 in November. Out of all of us, I have the worst health by far. So I kept thinking I'm going to go first go first, But my sister said I take a lickin and keep on tickin

I hope I go first because I won't be able to stand burying my brothers and sisters

I enjoyed reading your story

Good job. Thank you for post.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
    Hi, thank you so much for reading my story. It's biographical. Brother did not think Daddy died because he didn't get cornbread. He knew it was because he missed Mama so much. What bother Jim was that the one tiny thing Daddy asked for that day, Jim was too busy to do. The guilt of not providing that one comfort stayed with him until he died in 2019. My husband died twelve years ago and how I adored him! I thought that was the worst that could happen until my daughter, Jaimie, died after taking the Covid booster. Her doctor told me that the cases of double-viral pneumonia skyrocketed with that booster, as did so many other illnesses. With her loss, I lost the will to live. I have a son, but he and his wife live about 900 miles away, so I seldom see them. Right now, I keep on because my sister and her husband are both disabled, and I am trying to help them. The joy of life left with my daughter's death.