2024 Japanese Poetry
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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A seductively beautiful poem. I love the colors you used. Where do you get your artwork? Do you do it yourself? I always compliments your piece perfectly. thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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A seductively beautiful poem. I love the colors you used. Where do you get your artwork? Do you do it yourself? I always compliments your piece perfectly. thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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I get my pictures from my Pinterest account. I do modify them to improve the look and emotions.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from BOO ghost
Gogyohka poems didn't have a name until 1983? Of course, an outsider gets the credit for a Japanese poem created in 1910. So, the Japanese had to call the poetry genre something, right? Breathtaking image and colorful words that match. Embrace a sea of passion. A mermaid pops into my mind after reading this. This poem has many metaphors. The same words mean something different to different people.
BOO!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Gogyohka poems didn't have a name until 1983? Of course, an outsider gets the credit for a Japanese poem created in 1910. So, the Japanese had to call the poetry genre something, right? Breathtaking image and colorful words that match. Embrace a sea of passion. A mermaid pops into my mind after reading this. This poem has many metaphors. The same words mean something different to different people.
BOO!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from royowen
Yes, I think the hardest thing to do in life is to let go of one's.fear and plunge into the deep end, after all some have been taught to swim that way, and perhaps falling in love needs courage, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Yes, I think the hardest thing to do in life is to let go of one's.fear and plunge into the deep end, after all some have been taught to swim that way, and perhaps falling in love needs courage, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate your kind review.
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Well done
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The sea has seduced many people from years passed and continues to do so today. Of course, it's not the only seductress around. Your presentation and poem are perfect. Thank you.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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The sea has seduced many people from years passed and continues to do so today. Of course, it's not the only seductress around. Your presentation and poem are perfect. Thank you.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your kind review.
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Comment from GWHARGIS
I love that you used the ocean as a seductress. And it has seduced many. From sailors, swimmers, surfers, marine scientists, to poets and artists. This was full of passion and the urge to let go of passions. Beautiful. Gretchen
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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I love that you used the ocean as a seductress. And it has seduced many. From sailors, swimmers, surfers, marine scientists, to poets and artists. This was full of passion and the urge to let go of passions. Beautiful. Gretchen
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen. I appreciate your kind words and excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Comment from RJ Heritage
Well she certainly looks like the "passion of the sea." She is beautiful and very enticing, not unlike those mythical sirens with their alluring songs and words. Stunning and well illustrated.
RJ
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Well she certainly looks like the "passion of the sea." She is beautiful and very enticing, not unlike those mythical sirens with their alluring songs and words. Stunning and well illustrated.
RJ
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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You're welcome
Comment from shelley kaye
love the water pics and the teal shades
like the diving into the poem and jumping into the deep end...
a great poem with nice imagery and deep feeling
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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love the water pics and the teal shades
like the diving into the poem and jumping into the deep end...
a great poem with nice imagery and deep feeling
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Love the personification of the sea: those "salty kisses" and "untamable waves." Your verse oozes an overwhelming sense of passion and liberation, as ever, beautifully composed and presented. Take care Debbie.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Love the personification of the sea: those "salty kisses" and "untamable waves." Your verse oozes an overwhelming sense of passion and liberation, as ever, beautifully composed and presented. Take care Debbie.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from bonespur
This was an interesting little poem that appears to be a good candidate for the contest. The structure seemed right and the rhyming didn't seem forced. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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This was an interesting little poem that appears to be a good candidate for the contest. The structure seemed right and the rhyming didn't seem forced. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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No contest
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
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You're welcome
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This is a beautiful poem in a style that intrigues me because I am unfamiliar with it. It's wonderfully well written. Thanks for sharing and happy writing with my best wishes.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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This is a beautiful poem in a style that intrigues me because I am unfamiliar with it. It's wonderfully well written. Thanks for sharing and happy writing with my best wishes.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy