The Gift
Bad moment at work had unexpected turn2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was a very interesting story. I like how you ended it (or didn't?). I enjoyed this bit of fiction. Thank you for sharing this story, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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This was a very interesting story. I like how you ended it (or didn't?). I enjoyed this bit of fiction. Thank you for sharing this story, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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THanksssssssss!
Comment from royowen
It sounds like unplanned, unaccountable encounter, that happen occasionally in one's life, an encounter that leaves its thumbprint, but escapes without reason, just something deep and mysterious. Sensitive and touching, Beautifully written,
Typo (bistander) bystanders? 2: asking (about) her day. 3: this gift of (a) hug.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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It sounds like unplanned, unaccountable encounter, that happen occasionally in one's life, an encounter that leaves its thumbprint, but escapes without reason, just something deep and mysterious. Sensitive and touching, Beautifully written,
Typo (bistander) bystanders? 2: asking (about) her day. 3: this gift of (a) hug.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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sometimes I purposely avoid prepositions and articles... it seems too wordy and too literary otherwise..... but it's a gray area. The bystanders I will fix. Thanks for the feedback! Glad you didn't hate it :)
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Eastern Europeans don have articles, but they speak English without them, but language is more than we are.
