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Comment from Phame Louis
The dialogue between Connie, Miranda, and Nessa is engaging, revealing underlying tensions and awkwardness in their initial interaction. The scene effectively conveys Connie's cautious approach and Miranda's defensive responses.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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The dialogue between Connie, Miranda, and Nessa is engaging, revealing underlying tensions and awkwardness in their initial interaction. The scene effectively conveys Connie's cautious approach and Miranda's defensive responses.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your feedback. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work and provide insight into the story.
-Tirzah
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This is a very interesting scene. It makes me wonder what will happen next. I'm glad i'm following you. Have a good time writing. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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This is a very interesting scene. It makes me wonder what will happen next. I'm glad i'm following you. Have a good time writing. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your support and feedback!
-Tirzah