Comment from
Bill Schott
This poem, The Secrets We Keep, speaks to the multiplying problems that occur when deceit serves as the foundation for further lies. Making it right requires great dismantling and many meals of humble pie.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
Thanks for reading my entry. You were right on target for the meaning of the poem!
Comment from
bonespur
This looks to be a good candidate for the contest. Your flow is nice and your rhyming scheme doesn't seem forced. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
I appreciate you taking the time to review my entry. Enjoy the rest of your evening.