Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i like the 'captive audience' satori - nice one!
great alliteration in the first two lines. . .
good imagery and smooth flow throughout

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I guess that the wildlife all around that "stage" become a captive audience and perhaps being rooted on stage with the reeds holding the elms in place. I think the first picture may be some kind of evergreen conifer...

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review, big sister.

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Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

They are beautiful trees that srand tall, and capture the attention of anyone who come upon them.
Very beautiful illustration.
Thank s for sharing
RJ

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024

I love elms. They remind me of my childhood.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs 😊

reply by RJ Heritage on 17-Jul-2024

You're welcome

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

You painted a lovely picture in very few words. Your photographs complement the poem perfectly. As always, your formatting is beautiful. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

If the elms are a captive audience, I am wondering exactly what the show is. My imagination is running while with the possibilities of what they're watching. LOL Again, a beautiful presentation.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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