Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

Very nice love poem about your husband, Darla. Did you show him the poem? I think the short lines in this poem are a good idea. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024

No I didn't show him the poem yet. You are the one that told me to use six syllables in each line. Thanks!

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the Love Poem Poetry Contest. It's wonderful when you find a couple who still feel that way about each other after years together. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024

Thank you!

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

I love the photo; it pairs well with this great little love poem. Best of luck in the voting for this love poem contest. Thank you for sharing your talent.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024

You are welcome.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This love poem for the contest was very sweet! It sounds like you are lucky enough to have found your "other half." I love that you even love his snores and bald head. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024

You are welcome, and thank you!

Comment from Tomisin👀

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem that shows a deep love for someone, and all parts of them.Your rhyme scheme also makes it seem more fresh in a way .Thank you!

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024

You are welcome. I was trying to make it humorous.

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

Yes, there are some of us older ones that can be pretty special. I don't know if my wife would say that about me. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024

Older ones? Thanks!