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Infatuated

a 5-7-5

9 total reviews 
Comment from F. William Lester
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OMG! That's a new definition for me. The picture says it all. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing your poem. Stay well and have a great day.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
    Thank you, FW
reply by F. William Lester on 19-Jul-2024
    You're very welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This made me smile, a fun post and this guy loves his pie and it is evident in his appearance! I love that you used the word inFATuated, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
    Thank you, Dolly
Comment from Colorado Owl
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Very well done! This poem is funny, but then I look at the picture and I no longer smile :-(
Excellent word play. Good to you luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
    Thank you, CO
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poem writing prompt. LOL This is a perfect definition of the word. I can also get infatuated with potatoes and pasta but that's for another poem. Nice job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
    Thank you, Marilyn
Comment from bonespur
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This seems to be a good candidate for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. Your syllable count is right. I would have given you 5 stars, but personally, I find the picture you chose offensive and it completely took me away from the poem. Good luck and have a blessed day

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    I found it offensive too. That is why it is there.
Comment from Julie G1
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So well expressed. This verse expressed a great response to the prompt. The poet has chosen great imagery and apt language, enhanced by the slightly humorous graphic, adding to the overall realistic effect. Worked well for this reader.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    Thank you, Julie
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

You are clever. Yes, that is the definition of infatuated.

I can't do that anymore since I'm diabetic. I could do it and then give myself more insulin but insulin in and of itself is a poison even though it's something you need. Too much is not good

It's hard to say much in these tiny poems, and even harder to review them

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    Thank you, Pam. None of us can still do what we did before. (Dang it!)
Comment from Lindsey Russell
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This poem is great. It's so funny. Who knew a definition is the beginnings of a good poem. Thank you for sharing. Good luck with the contest and happy writing!!!!!

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    Thank you, Lindsey
Comment from papa55mike
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I don't know about candy and pie, but I can chow down some ice cream with the best. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the play on words. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    Thank you, Mike, for the kind review.