The House on the Hill - Play
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Scene 4 - Act 1"Mystery
2 total reviews
Comment from Barry Penfold
This had a nice flow to it. The conversations were natural and you placed a hint of intrigue in there as well. Why did Paul give a key to the Moving Man.? Nicely done and thanks for sharing.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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This had a nice flow to it. The conversations were natural and you placed a hint of intrigue in there as well. Why did Paul give a key to the Moving Man.? Nicely done and thanks for sharing.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your kind feedback. I appreciate it!
-Tirzah
Comment from Lindsey Russell
I like what I've read of this. You are a very talented script writer. Thanks so much for sharing. Happy script writing! Best wishes to you!!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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I like what I've read of this. You are a very talented script writer. Thanks so much for sharing. Happy script writing! Best wishes to you!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback on my play!
-Tirzah