The House on the Hill - Play
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Scene 3 - Act 1"Mystery
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Comment from Tomisin👀
I love this scene so far, and I like Emmaline's character as well.Well done!Her and Paul's relationship is very well thought out and are very interesting personalities.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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I love this scene so far, and I like Emmaline's character as well.Well done!Her and Paul's relationship is very well thought out and are very interesting personalities.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your feedback! I appreciate you taking the time to read my play.
-Tirzah
Comment from papa55mike
There are many interesting ways this story can go. Please check this line: Paul is sitting in the living (room) drinking (a) gin and tonic. Please consider adding those two words. What a wonderfully written piece. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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There are many interesting ways this story can go. Please check this line: Paul is sitting in the living (room) drinking (a) gin and tonic. Please consider adding those two words. What a wonderfully written piece. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Thank you! I get typing pretty fast sometimes! Thank you for your feedback.
-Tirzah