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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This is a beautiful metaphor for life. Many people are pushed year by year, or day by day, until they are living on the edge. Not a good place to be. It's not as beautiful as your presentation. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara

    😊 Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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way cool pic!!! the haiku is perfect with "living on the edge"!
great imagery and smooth flow - excellent all around
thank you for sharing
shelley :-)

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley

    😊 Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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But the tree stayed strong despite being pushed by the wind. It seems like a hard way to live but some people are like that growing strong despite lots of adversity in life.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister

    ❤️love ❤️

    Marival

Comment from BOO ghost
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The colors are eye-popping! How you work so fast! Author notes are appreciated. I could be this cherry tree, being pushed to the edge every season, or anyone for that matter. Who was the president that chopped the cherry tree? Beautiful picture and presentation no doubt! Another beauty in paradise! What's your secret to writing?

BOO!

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    My secret is practice and follow your passion 😊

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs ❤️
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Such a beautiful tree, sent to the edge by a force of nature, reminds me of the forces in our own lives that push us to the cliff. But like that old cherry tree, we must be resilient and keep holding on. Who knows? We too, might look upon the cool waters beneath as we near the end of our lives.
RJ

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs ❤️