2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm not exactly sure those are peaceful clouds, but hey, why not. We can be optimistic, right? Regardless, they present a great poem and beautiful presentation. You're one of the best.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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I'm not exactly sure those are peaceful clouds, but hey, why not. We can be optimistic, right? Regardless, they present a great poem and beautiful presentation. You're one of the best.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
😊 Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I like the idea of clouds "resting peacefully on the mount." In the heat of this month, there's something peaceful to see clouds on top of the mountain where it is probably a lot cooler!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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I like the idea of clouds "resting peacefully on the mount." In the heat of this month, there's something peaceful to see clouds on top of the mountain where it is probably a lot cooler!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister
😊 love
Marival
Comment from Ricky1024
The various clouds above are not only interesting but beautiful.
The whole thought of such massive structures flying in thin air and collecting moisture.
The collision between the two front causing a specific spatacularshow.
Don't you know?
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But any how good for you and beautiful Art Work as always Gypsy
Doctor Ricky.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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The various clouds above are not only interesting but beautiful.
The whole thought of such massive structures flying in thin air and collecting moisture.
The collision between the two front causing a specific spatacularshow.
Don't you know?
...
But any how good for you and beautiful Art Work as always Gypsy
Doctor Ricky.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Dr Ricky 😊
Gypsy
Comment from BOO ghost
Another dandy of a haiku! The presentation is stunning as always! You have certainly honed your craft over the past few years. You're an artist. Resting peacefully has a tranquil calm about it. Clouds dipping to the mountain peaks. Some times, less words carry a heavier message. I don't think you have to worry about writers block, ever! Your work ethic is out of this world!
BOO!
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Another dandy of a haiku! The presentation is stunning as always! You have certainly honed your craft over the past few years. You're an artist. Resting peacefully has a tranquil calm about it. Clouds dipping to the mountain peaks. Some times, less words carry a heavier message. I don't think you have to worry about writers block, ever! Your work ethic is out of this world!
BOO!
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, boo 😊
Gypsy
Comment from juliaSjames
I believe my understanding of this short write is limited because I don't know if July clouds is significant as a season word. But as any good haiku is prone to do it stirs memories for me. In Caracas I could see the Avila mountain from my bedroom window. Very often it was wreathed in clouds like a lady in a fur stole. Not so much peaceful as other worldly.
Blessings, Julia
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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I believe my understanding of this short write is limited because I don't know if July clouds is significant as a season word. But as any good haiku is prone to do it stirs memories for me. In Caracas I could see the Avila mountain from my bedroom window. Very often it was wreathed in clouds like a lady in a fur stole. Not so much peaceful as other worldly.
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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I used July clouds because it's July and in Los Angeles, California, we get clouds now and then. We just had some last week.
Thank you very much, Cheryl 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
I like your variation in the colors of your font rerpresentative of clouds and mount. To me, a perfect expression of harmony between the highs and lows of life as seen by the one rea hing out and up to the other.
Glad that you shared.
RJ
RJ
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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I like your variation in the colors of your font rerpresentative of clouds and mount. To me, a perfect expression of harmony between the highs and lows of life as seen by the one rea hing out and up to the other.
Glad that you shared.
RJ
RJ
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ 😊
Gypsy
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You are welcome
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Gypsy. How the heck are you?
Do you know that your box at the end is black and even when enlarging it's just black. I don't know if you thought you put some text in there. If not, please ignore me. By the way, your box in front is also totally black
I wasn't sure about the reference to the mount. Is that a mountain? The image seems to answer my question. The clouds,a fog, is on top of the mountain there.
I love fog because it cleans out the air of contaminants and it's really a cloud. It's just low so it's covering part of the earth Usually it is in the mountains. Because they are higher up than the rest of earth
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Hi, Gypsy. How the heck are you?
Do you know that your box at the end is black and even when enlarging it's just black. I don't know if you thought you put some text in there. If not, please ignore me. By the way, your box in front is also totally black
I wasn't sure about the reference to the mount. Is that a mountain? The image seems to answer my question. The clouds,a fog, is on top of the mountain there.
I love fog because it cleans out the air of contaminants and it's really a cloud. It's just low so it's covering part of the earth Usually it is in the mountains. Because they are higher up than the rest of earth
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Pam 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Neonewman
This is another beautiful Haiku, Gypsy. I enjoy reading all forms of Haiku and short works. Thank you for sharing your talent and the chosen artwork.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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This is another beautiful Haiku, Gypsy. I enjoy reading all forms of Haiku and short works. Thank you for sharing your talent and the chosen artwork.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
i love clouds... they provide us with shade and give us a break from the burning evil day-star LOL!
a great haiku
and cool pic - those clouds do look peaceful just floating there...
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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i love clouds... they provide us with shade and give us a break from the burning evil day-star LOL!
a great haiku
and cool pic - those clouds do look peaceful just floating there...
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley 😊
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
July is usually our wettest month in North Carolina. We've had a few good storms but nothing like usual. I guess our clouds are sitting on that mountain. Lol. Beautiful poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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July is usually our wettest month in North Carolina. We've had a few good storms but nothing like usual. I guess our clouds are sitting on that mountain. Lol. Beautiful poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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LoL. Lazy clouds.
Thank you very much, Gretchen 😊
Gypsy