The House on the Hill - Play
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Comment from EvitaP
This made me laugh, thank you for sharing this piece. I am more like a Paul laid back straight to the point and extra explanation. Love the characters.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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This made me laugh, thank you for sharing this piece. I am more like a Paul laid back straight to the point and extra explanation. Love the characters.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your feedback. I hope you enjoy the whole play.
-Tirzah
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Yes I'm sure I will! And I meant to say with no extra explanation, like straight to the point:)
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Tirzah. How the heck are you?
Guess what? I found no errors this time. I found a couple spots that I would reworfd, but there was nothing technically wrong about them. Do you want feedback on those too? I can do that not this time but next time if you want it
I thought this was very well written. I don't think I read the first chapter or I should say act 1 scene 1
So this is the first time I've seen Paul and Connie. I'm not sure if Lucille just has a bit part here or if she's going to be part of your future script.
I enjoyed reading your script
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Hi, Tirzah. How the heck are you?
Guess what? I found no errors this time. I found a couple spots that I would reworfd, but there was nothing technically wrong about them. Do you want feedback on those too? I can do that not this time but next time if you want it
I thought this was very well written. I don't think I read the first chapter or I should say act 1 scene 1
So this is the first time I've seen Paul and Connie. I'm not sure if Lucille just has a bit part here or if she's going to be part of your future script.
I enjoyed reading your script
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your feedback!
-Tirzah