The Value of Time.
Time is a resource that is non renewable.5 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Yes, the time we have allotted is a gift, we can only spend it on learning. how precious it is, or how easy to wast it, every moment we enjoy should be invested to be a legacy of worth. Beautifully written an thought out, well done, blessings Roy
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Yes, the time we have allotted is a gift, we can only spend it on learning. how precious it is, or how easy to wast it, every moment we enjoy should be invested to be a legacy of worth. Beautifully written an thought out, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
Comment from Lindsey Russell
Man this really makes you think! Time is most certainly precious. This is a great piece. Wonderful work! Thanks for sharing it! Good luck on your writing endeavors. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Man this really makes you think! Time is most certainly precious. This is a great piece. Wonderful work! Thanks for sharing it! Good luck on your writing endeavors. Best wishes.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for the feedback!
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, jonny
This is a concept that many poems are written about
You said it as elegantly as any of them
Yes, time cannot be bought. And you can't take your money with you. I suppose it could be buried with you but that's not the same thing. People have done that so other people can't enjoy their fortunes. That's about a selfish as you can get.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Hi, jonny
This is a concept that many poems are written about
You said it as elegantly as any of them
Yes, time cannot be bought. And you can't take your money with you. I suppose it could be buried with you but that's not the same thing. People have done that so other people can't enjoy their fortunes. That's about a selfish as you can get.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Thank you, I appreciate the feedback!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your reflection on the value of time beautifully shown. Each line thoughtfully captures the precious and fleeting nature of our moments here. I love how you urge us to consider how we choose to spend them. It's beautifully crafted. I love the rhyme scheme as this flows so naturally. Great job!
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Your reflection on the value of time beautifully shown. Each line thoughtfully captures the precious and fleeting nature of our moments here. I love how you urge us to consider how we choose to spend them. It's beautifully crafted. I love the rhyme scheme as this flows so naturally. Great job!
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the feed back!
Comment from tfawcus
A deeply resonant poem. How profligate we are sometimes in the way we use our time. No matter how we treat it, it continues to trickle away. Thought provoking.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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A deeply resonant poem. How profligate we are sometimes in the way we use our time. No matter how we treat it, it continues to trickle away. Thought provoking.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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thank you for your thoughts.i agree , sometimes we just don't appreciate it till it's gone.