Task at Hand.
A nonet poem about being overwhelmed.2 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I agree that if we would just focus on our tasks and get them done, then we could get past them and relax
What i used to work, I would always make lists because in my job it was so complicated. If I didn't have a list then a task would go by the wayside and then I'd find out later when it was very painful to find out that I had forgotten to do it.
Then, I would just check everything off on my list. Add things to it and then eventually make a new list eliminating the tasks that had already been completed. It was a never-ending battle. Your poem illustrates this to the T
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I agree that if we would just focus on our tasks and get them done, then we could get past them and relax
What i used to work, I would always make lists because in my job it was so complicated. If I didn't have a list then a task would go by the wayside and then I'd find out later when it was very painful to find out that I had forgotten to do it.
Then, I would just check everything off on my list. Add things to it and then eventually make a new list eliminating the tasks that had already been completed. It was a never-ending battle. Your poem illustrates this to the T
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I could feel the tension of wanting to get something done but, not being able to. There is a need to be able to be productive shown here but also the difficult with the challenges of modern life. I like how you formatted this. The short lines seem to share an attempt to regain control and stay focused. Great job. So creative!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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I could feel the tension of wanting to get something done but, not being able to. There is a need to be able to be productive shown here but also the difficult with the challenges of modern life. I like how you formatted this. The short lines seem to share an attempt to regain control and stay focused. Great job. So creative!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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Thank you