Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

If you wrote this birthday poem for Karen, why are you describing me? Lol. Il enjoyed the humorous things you mentioned about the aging process we all face. To Karen I say, Happy birthday, and I wish you many more years of joy, peace, health, and love.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024

Thank you for this great review. :)

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi
This poem uses repetition well to show celebration of this day for birthday.
I wish her a joyful one and many more.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day and week.
Joan

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024

Thank you, l really appreciate this terrific review. :)

reply by dragonpoet on 12-Aug-2024

My pleasure, Sharon.
Joan

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine happy birthday poem full of happiness and celebrations. A fine poem for the contest, very uplifting and full of fun things to do, love Dolly x x x x x x

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024

Thanks so much. :)

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

OH! You got some smooth burns in lol She will love them. The best thing about Karen is that she is able to laugh at herself. And if she laughs at you, just consider it a compliment because she knows what's funny. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024

Thank you, l really appreciate this great review. :)

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

This is just wonderful. Unfortunately you hit the mark all to often :-) Really really well done. I thank you from the bottom of my pea picking heart. Karen

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024

Thank you so much for this nice review. :)

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your birthday poem for Karen is so heartfelt. I love how you blend humor with genuine warmth. The rhyming structure and light-hearted teasing add a cheerful tone to the celebration. I can see that Karen is cherished. It's a wonderful tribute! Well done!

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024

Thank you, l appreciate this great review. :)

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

I started writing one for this contest, but it's nowhere near as good as yours. This will be the contest winner, hands down. I might post mine just so yours will seem even better.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024

I would love to read yours, you are stiff competition for me. Thank you for the kind words.

reply by jim vecchio on 16-Jul-2024

Thank you. I'm glad we're in this together, to learn from one another, and tht I always rejoice in your contributions to FS!

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi Boogienights. I hope you are well

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

This is delightful. Was Nancy 29 again?

You had a good rhyming scheme with no set meter

I like how you repeated the happy birthday to Nancy on each stanza. I thought your rhymes were really cool. The whole thing was really cool. I like it a lot.

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024

Thank you for this terrific review. :)

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very nice poem that you have written for Karen for her birthday and wish her a happy birthday and I also wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a wonderful week. Patricia.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024

Thank you, I'm always glad to hear from you. :)