Twister
Destructive force of Nature4 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Great job with your Wizard of Oz themed Nonet, Terry. You kept a clean graduated edge too which is needed for a proper Nonet. Congratulations on your ribbon. Sending you my best today as always.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Great job with your Wizard of Oz themed Nonet, Terry. You kept a clean graduated edge too which is needed for a proper Nonet. Congratulations on your ribbon. Sending you my best today as always.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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So kind, Sally. Many thank yous. Cheers, Terry.
Comment from zanya
This Nonet paints a very realistic picture of a Twister and the impact it can have as it barrels down on the earth- excellent choice of language here' wrapping plains in a dusty shroud.'
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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This Nonet paints a very realistic picture of a Twister and the impact it can have as it barrels down on the earth- excellent choice of language here' wrapping plains in a dusty shroud.'
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Zanya.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done! Your poem does a wonderful job of sharing the destructive force of a tornado. Your word choices are perfect! What stood out to me was "louring cloud" and the tornado's "dusty shroud". Add to that "swirling," "eclipsing," and "sucking up" just worked so well. Add to that the abrupt line breaks and the way you structured the poem to look like a tornado. Perfect!
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Nicely done! Your poem does a wonderful job of sharing the destructive force of a tornado. Your word choices are perfect! What stood out to me was "louring cloud" and the tornado's "dusty shroud". Add to that "swirling," "eclipsing," and "sucking up" just worked so well. Add to that the abrupt line breaks and the way you structured the poem to look like a tornado. Perfect!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Terrific review, Michael. Many thanks.
Comment from RodG
Good title for this Nonet.
Each line has required number of syllables.
Good enjambment as your visual reads smoothly from line to line.
Vivid imagery.
Effective use of rhyme.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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Good title for this Nonet.
Each line has required number of syllables.
Good enjambment as your visual reads smoothly from line to line.
Vivid imagery.
Effective use of rhyme.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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Thanks, Rod.
