Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very well chapter for your book and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your sent structure your paragraph and you overall presentation is very good. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless you. Patricia.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024

Thanks Pat!

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Luke had a problem that's for sure. Thank you for sharing this post with us. I can't wait to read more.

Ruth stood next to Luke. "This is what you tried to tell me. An Indian girl lives with you?" (stood beside Luke)

words between them would have to wait, even when His heart beat inside like a base drum. (his)

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024

Thanks Barbara. What you said motivates me even more to get into the heart of the story.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I've missed this story a lot Stan, it's a darn good story, with Luke in a quandary about two women, one a mail order, two Alyanna, and three a young Anna, a five year old, Ruth knows Luke is in love with her, this is really exciting, well done, blessings Roy
Typo query. Like (a) yoke over the prairie?!?

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024

Thanks so much Roy. What you said motivates me all the more.

reply by royowen on 15-Jul-2024

Well done

reply by royowen on 15-Jul-2024

Good job

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

He seem torn even though he is in love with Aiyani. He cares about Ruth's little girl. For someone who had no woman in his life, now he has got one too many. I'm glad you have time to post again.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024

Thanks for always being there Beth.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Glad you've been busy with blessings, Stan.
Good that you could pick up where you left off. It seems Luke's decisions have become much clearer. He loves Aiyana, but he will offer some protection to Ruth and Anna.

Ayanna held the reins (Aiyana)

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024

Thanks for your depth of thought in review, as always, I look forward to hearing from you.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Great job. This was so enjoyable. Your writing effortlessly immerses the reader into a journey. The characters emotions and the tension between feels so real. The dynamic between Luke, Ruth, Anna, and Aiyana is particularly real. I'm eager to see how these threads will unravel.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024

Thanks so much for your in depth comments. Appreciate it.