2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Mark Schardine
The third line catches us off-guard, and when we reach for a history book, or a guidebook, we realize we need to stop and ponder the events here in this site of commemoration.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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The third line catches us off-guard, and when we reach for a history book, or a guidebook, we realize we need to stop and ponder the events here in this site of commemoration.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have no clue when our governments will ever understand that war doesn't solve any problems. War only makes them worse. We need God fearing governments. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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I have no clue when our governments will ever understand that war doesn't solve any problems. War only makes them worse. We need God fearing governments. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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I agree with you. I wish peace for everyone in the word. One of these lifetimes we will learn from our mistakes and evolve to be loving and kind human beings.
Thank you very much, Barbara 😊
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Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
the blood of war victims
s e e p e d
into the ground
nourishing seeds
for a lifetime. . .
grass and weeds grow red in memory
a great haiku!!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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the blood of war victims
s e e p e d
into the ground
nourishing seeds
for a lifetime. . .
grass and weeds grow red in memory
a great haiku!!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley 😊
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Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Your symbolism is very strong in this poem, as the red grass to me speak to tge blood that was shed on the battle field of this legendary tale. I remember seeing such a battle ensued as depicted in Cabrera PeƱa's work.
RJ
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Your symbolism is very strong in this poem, as the red grass to me speak to tge blood that was shed on the battle field of this legendary tale. I remember seeing such a battle ensued as depicted in Cabrera PeƱa's work.
RJ
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is quite a chilling and haunting haiku, reminding us of wartime bloodshed. The sky is dark and the wind may, we hope one day, blow those memories away. Small edit in the title Me(a)dow. Nicely done, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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This is quite a chilling and haunting haiku, reminding us of wartime bloodshed. The sky is dark and the wind may, we hope one day, blow those memories away. Small edit in the title Me(a)dow. Nicely done, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie. It's always a pleasure to hear from you. I corrected the title.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
Ah yes, I often wonder about where battlefields were once fought, I've been to old battlefields that were untouched by human hands, and some are overgrown with weeds and an eeriness, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Ah yes, I often wonder about where battlefields were once fought, I've been to old battlefields that were untouched by human hands, and some are overgrown with weeds and an eeriness, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy.
Have a wonderful evening..... or morning.
Gypsy
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Most.welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Ah, the "red grass" got its name not because it's a particular kind of grass but because of the bloody battlefield that took place on it and permanently changed the sense of that place. I hope all wars will stop and Putin will lose power and Gaza will be free from war! There are probably more wars we don't hear about ...
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Ah, the "red grass" got its name not because it's a particular kind of grass but because of the bloody battlefield that took place on it and permanently changed the sense of that place. I hope all wars will stop and Putin will lose power and Gaza will be free from war! There are probably more wars we don't hear about ...
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Yes, I hope all wars end and the human race learn how to behave kindly and with mutual respect.
Thank you very much, big sister. Have a wonderful evening.
Love
Marival ❤️