2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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7 total reviews
Comment from Mark Schardine
Brilliant!
You combined the artwork and the poetry in an excellent fashion. Poetry and art fans each take great pleasant in this work, and express our appreciation.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Brilliant!
You combined the artwork and the poetry in an excellent fashion. Poetry and art fans each take great pleasant in this work, and express our appreciation.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark. I appreciate the exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from BOO ghost
The presentation, the artwork, is immaculate! I'm spellbound how you have evolved as an artist. I envy you! My new android tablet doesn't allow video embedded codes. Maybe I can insert pictures into the body? Dang, Nice selection of words to complete this poem. Your author footnotes help big-time! This is another masterpiece, although not promoted? Take your good nugget Gypsy Queen. BOO!
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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The presentation, the artwork, is immaculate! I'm spellbound how you have evolved as an artist. I envy you! My new android tablet doesn't allow video embedded codes. Maybe I can insert pictures into the body? Dang, Nice selection of words to complete this poem. Your author footnotes help big-time! This is another masterpiece, although not promoted? Take your good nugget Gypsy Queen. BOO!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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I can't afford to promote all my work because I write 2 poems a day and I don't have the time to review a lot.
Thank you very much, BOO. 😊
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Gypsy
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I see your delima. You still a posting machine!
Comment from shelley kaye
a refreshing wash under the full moon
as the light glistens on the water. . .
very nice haiku with great imagery
smooth flow - the pics are perfect
and the green font shades are , too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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a refreshing wash under the full moon
as the light glistens on the water. . .
very nice haiku with great imagery
smooth flow - the pics are perfect
and the green font shades are , too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley 😊
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Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautiful expression that creates a feeling of celestial interest in an earthly being. I see this as depicted by her toes in the flowing river whitest the moon engages its waters. Thanks for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Beautiful expression that creates a feeling of celestial interest in an earthly being. I see this as depicted by her toes in the flowing river whitest the moon engages its waters. Thanks for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
So cool to be washing feet in the "moon" or her reflection in the river's waves. Such a lovely image - I could just imagine the moon "bobbing up and down".
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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So cool to be washing feet in the "moon" or her reflection in the river's waves. Such a lovely image - I could just imagine the moon "bobbing up and down".
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I'm happy you like it.
Love
Marival
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was so playful and whimsical. I could see the moon as it was tossed on the water. A giant orange beach ball, if you will. It reminded me of mythology. Very cool poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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This was so playful and whimsical. I could see the moon as it was tossed on the water. A giant orange beach ball, if you will. It reminded me of mythology. Very cool poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen.
Have a wonderful evening.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Bare feet, a creek, and a moon, it doesn't get any better than that. How perfect is that, and one can reflect on their thoughts. It's really peaceful then. I bet one could write beautiful poetry then. I love the entire setting you've presented.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Bare feet, a creek, and a moon, it doesn't get any better than that. How perfect is that, and one can reflect on their thoughts. It's really peaceful then. I bet one could write beautiful poetry then. I love the entire setting you've presented.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara.
Have a wonderful evening..... or morning.
Gypsy