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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I understand we must all die at our appointed time. God is there to help us through it. I couldn't find any way to improve this poem.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I understand we must all die at our appointed time. God is there to help us through it. I couldn't find any way to improve this poem.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Thanks Barbara and enjoy this beautiful morning.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This is eye opening. Especially the note at the end. Here: Takr a Single Breath" Did you mean Take? Thank you for sharing and happy writing!!!!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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This is eye opening. Especially the note at the end. Here: Takr a Single Breath" Did you mean Take? Thank you for sharing and happy writing!!!!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thanks Lindsey and I corrected the grammar issue.
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought your poem really did a wonderful job of looking at life's journey and the fact that we all are going to die. Well done on capturing such profound and deep thoughts with such grace.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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I thought your poem really did a wonderful job of looking at life's journey and the fact that we all are going to die. Well done on capturing such profound and deep thoughts with such grace.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thanks Micheal and stay tuned for "Ring of Skulls!'
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