Rest
an ABC poem7 total reviews
Comment from pookietoo
How is this an ABC poem? I don't quite understand. Enjoy the little things, and best wishes to you. Keep up the great work. Best wishes to you. Keep smiling.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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How is this an ABC poem? I don't quite understand. Enjoy the little things, and best wishes to you. Keep up the great work. Best wishes to you. Keep smiling.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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An ABC poem has five lines. The first four lines are alphabetical (QRST) and the fifth can be anything. Mine is also alphabetical (U).
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Ok
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Okay, yes rest is very important to our well-being. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Okay, yes rest is very important to our well-being. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Barbara
Comment from lyenochka
Life is such a balance of being tested and resting the Lord! I loved how you connected the lines with a near-loop kind of poem. The end word becomes the present active participle that starts the next line. Cool! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Life is such a balance of being tested and resting the Lord! I loved how you connected the lines with a near-loop kind of poem. The end word becomes the present active participle that starts the next line. Cool! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thanks, Helen
Comment from jim vecchio
What about the REST of your poem? Sorry. Just TESTing you! You SHOW talent in longer and shorter works. TOUGH for some writers to bet your skill. REST assured, you're a great writer.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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What about the REST of your poem? Sorry. Just TESTing you! You SHOW talent in longer and shorter works. TOUGH for some writers to bet your skill. REST assured, you're a great writer.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank yest
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Keep 'em coming!
Comment from nomi338
What a boring routine huh? Rest work, rest work. Day after day, hour after hour. Wake up, eat, work, eat, work, rest. Rinse and repeat, but don't forget to wash, rinse and repeat, and for God's sake don't forget to eat and sleep. Ho-hum, snore.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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What a boring routine huh? Rest work, rest work. Day after day, hour after hour. Wake up, eat, work, eat, work, rest. Rinse and repeat, but don't forget to wash, rinse and repeat, and for God's sake don't forget to eat and sleep. Ho-hum, snore.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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I stubbed my toe today. At last!!!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought your poem poem beautifully captured the strength required to endure life's challenges. It's a well written poem that flows well and has such a strong message. Well done!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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I thought your poem poem beautifully captured the strength required to endure life's challenges. It's a well written poem that flows well and has such a strong message. Well done!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Michael
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This was terrific - not only an alphabet poem, but also a "loop" variety. Now THAT's clever and savvy! I bet this will do well for you in the ABC Poetry contest!! Good luck!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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This was terrific - not only an alphabet poem, but also a "loop" variety. Now THAT's clever and savvy! I bet this will do well for you in the ABC Poetry contest!! Good luck!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Rachelle, for giving this a look and an exceptional review.
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I thought it was especially clever!