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Butterfly Birthday

This is for LJ Butterfly

34 total reviews 
Comment from NanaGaye
Exceptional
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Beautiful poem Beautiful picture, but what else do we expect from you. I love Monique butterflies have some pictures I've taken. I wonder if you know of a song 'Darling why do I get Butterflies' My Father use to say that Mum was like a butterfly, she fluttered from one thing to another. Many years later there was a staff farewell for me, I needed to move on from being an office junior. The manager of the company got up and said 'Gaye is like a butterfly, nice things flit into are life and leave again to quickly'

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
    Gaye, you do remind me of a butterfly. Mainly because you are one of the loveliest people I know and so vibrant. Yes, I believe they said that.

    I thank you for the lovely review for my butterfly poem for Lorraine's birthday. Thanks so much, Sweetie for the generous stars!! I know Lorraine is also enjoying the birthday greetings and well wishes. I appreciate your kind comments so very much. Love, Debi
reply by NanaGaye on 22-Jul-2024
    LOL
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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That's so nice that the butterfly has become the symbol of a birthday celebration. A very cheerful greeting of the morning. You have accomplished you goal with a cheerful poem.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
    Hi Liz, I thank you for the lovely review for my butterfly poem for Lorraine's birthday. I know she is also enjoying the birthday greetings and well wishes. I appreciate your kind comments so very much. Love, Debi
reply by Liz O'Neill on 22-Jul-2024
    ***Warm smile***
Comment from Pam (respa)
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

-Lovely artwork and nice presentation, Debi.
-You wrote a very good birthday poem for Lorraine.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You do a good job giving some background about her,
as well as the significance of her pen name.
-I like the line about "Nature, flowers, rabbit hole."
-A very good concluding verse. Very well done.
Happy Birthday, Lorraine.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    Gosh, Pam, you are a sweetheart. Your reviews are so up and encouraging. You amaze me always with all your talent and to give such kind and caring reviews to others shows how beautiful your soul is. I am going to write a poem someday about you. And even if you won't let me share it, I will give it to only you by your email? I am sure you wouldn't mind that?

    Thank you a milllion times over for the lovely review and comments and for the honor of your six star. You are the best, my friend. Love ya lots, Debi
reply by Pam (respa) on 17-Jul-2024
    You are very welcome, and I appreciate your reply very much. I'll get back to you about the poem. I just didn't want a birthday poem. I'll send you a message,
reply by Pam (respa) on 17-Jul-2024
    You deserved the stars, my friend. Love you lots, too!
Comment from Sanku
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lovely poem and different from your usual biographical ones .But beautiful all the same .I loved the music. Imagine a terrace like that facing the sea.. how wonderful..

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    Hi Santha, I thank you for the lovely review for my butterfly poem for Lorraine's birthday. I know she is also enjoying the birthday greetings and well wishes. I appreciate your kind comments so very much. Love, Debi
Comment from Sueswrite
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This is such a lovely tribute, a beautiful gift for a person in this world, where a connection ties us all together as a family. Our bond is strong, the passion is undeniable and the love is forever. Your amazing talent is precious!

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    Hi Sue, and it is so good to see you. I thank you for the lovely review for my butterfly poem for Lorraine's birthday. I know she is also enjoying the birthday greetings and well wishes. I appreciate your kind comments so very much. Love, Debi

    And sorry this is so late, as I injured my right arm and I only been able to type with my left hand
reply by Sueswrite on 18-Jul-2024
    Oh, Debi, you are so very welcome! Speedy recovery to you!
Comment from Janet Foor
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Lovely poem for Lorraine. The butterfly is a beautiful way to describe someone from the sunshine state. I'm sure Lorraine will love it and we all wish her a happy birthday.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    Hi again Janet, slow but sure I will get this with the help of voice text too.
    I thank you for the lovely review for my butterfly poem for Lorraine's birthday. I know she is also enjoying the birthday greetings and well wishes. I appreciate your kind comments so very much. Love, Debi
Comment from Jacob1395
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I hope Lorraine had a great birthday, I thought you brought the place where she lives to life well in your poem and it made me picture it well. Another excellent birthday poem, Debi.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
    Awe, thanks Jacob. Lorraine is going to especially like the review from the guy who shares her birthday. It was hers on Saturday too and I asked if she'd rather have her own day and she said she would do Sunday. So I am sure she will love hearing from you.

    Thanks for the awesome comments for Lorraine and her poem. We both appreciate it very much. Hope you had a great birthday too. Love,, Debi
Comment from Neonewman
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I bet Lorraine enjoyed this beautiful piece. As always, you come through with these heartwarming birthday sentiments. What a lovely soul you have.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
    Steve, I thank you for the lovely review for my butterfly poem for Lorraine's birthday. I know she is also enjoying the birthday greetings and well wishes. I appreciate your kind comments for me as well. Love, Debi
reply by Neonewman on 18-Jul-2024
    My pleasure, Debi.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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Hi Debi, I love butterflies. The picture you chose is so beautiful. Your poem is very descriptive. The video is so nice, so soothing. Great writing Debi, love. Brenda. You are a special person to write about the writers in Fanstory.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    Hi Brenda, I thank you for the lovely review for my butterfly poem for Lorraine's birthday. I know she is also enjoying the birthday greetings and well wishes. I appreciate your kind comments so very much. Love, Debi

    And sorry this is so late, as I injured my right arm and I only been able to type with my left hand
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Love the gorgeous butterfly artwork for ljbutterfly and this is a beautiful poem to celebrate Lorraine's birthday. I loved the explanation of her pen name, for the changes in her life. Beautifully presented Debi,

valda

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
    Hi Valda and thanks for the lovely comments for Lorraine and her poem. You are so sweet and I know she will appreciate it as much as I do.
    Love, Debi
    Thank you too for the sweet six stars for her.