2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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8 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
As the river and the sky meet there is a peaceful feeling. I can see it and I can feel it. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us. I enjoyed both.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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As the river and the sky meet there is a peaceful feeling. I can see it and I can feel it. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us. I enjoyed both.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Ricky1024
"Wind River"
Was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Sunflower represents Friendship.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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"Wind River"
Was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Sunflower represents Friendship.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Dr Ricky
I appreciate your exceptional five-star review and words.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
I like that the River is called the "Wind River" which could also be a winding river and it "pulls the celestial sky" that's reflected into the waters to the bigger body of water, the sea. Lovely!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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I like that the River is called the "Wind River" which could also be a winding river and it "pulls the celestial sky" that's reflected into the waters to the bigger body of water, the sea. Lovely!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Big Sister. I appreciate your exceptional five-star review and words.
Love
marival
Comment from BOO ghost
Another lovely presentation! I can't conceive how you do it? BOO is reeling trying to keep up! Nice word combination. There's a kigo in a haiku? Author notes are a welcome. Do my best reviewing poetry. But I'm a novelist. Used to dabble in poetry as you recollect.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Another lovely presentation! I can't conceive how you do it? BOO is reeling trying to keep up! Nice word combination. There's a kigo in a haiku? Author notes are a welcome. Do my best reviewing poetry. But I'm a novelist. Used to dabble in poetry as you recollect.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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The kigo is spring because the daisies, clear sky and lake
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
I think there is a place where the spirit soars and a place where the soul dwells. I also believe that there is a time when they combine and exist in mutual harmony. This poem reminds me of such a unity as seen as the sky and river come together in the sea. Really elegant presentation.
RJ
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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I think there is a place where the spirit soars and a place where the soul dwells. I also believe that there is a time when they combine and exist in mutual harmony. This poem reminds me of such a unity as seen as the sky and river come together in the sea. Really elegant presentation.
RJ
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I know a haiku is perfect if it evokes a feeling of peace and serenity within me. This one did exactly that. It's soul-stirring in and of itself, but the gorgeous artwork is the final perfect finishing touch. I know this is repetitive, but you are so immensely talented!!!!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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I know a haiku is perfect if it evokes a feeling of peace and serenity within me. This one did exactly that. It's soul-stirring in and of itself, but the gorgeous artwork is the final perfect finishing touch. I know this is repetitive, but you are so immensely talented!!!!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Rachelle. You are so kind and generous. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
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So far, it's been terrific. Thank you! xo
Comment from shelley kaye
never been to wyoming
but that pic makes it look very peaceful
great imagery of the wind pulling the sky ~
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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never been to wyoming
but that pic makes it look very peaceful
great imagery of the wind pulling the sky ~
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
I could see where the sky's horizon met the sea. I've seen the sky over the ocean almost melt into the waters reflection. This was a beautifully written poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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I could see where the sky's horizon met the sea. I've seen the sky over the ocean almost melt into the waters reflection. This was a beautifully written poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy