The Rainy Day
The rain doesn’t always mean we have to stay inside!2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Congrats on your first post! I enjoyed it! I thought it was a delightful poem capturing the excitement of playing in the rain! Your words bring a sense of joy and adventure. The rhyme scheme is perfect for this poem. Your poem beautifully shares the bond between a child and their mother, turning a rainy day into a fun filled experience. Well done!
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Congrats on your first post! I enjoyed it! I thought it was a delightful poem capturing the excitement of playing in the rain! Your words bring a sense of joy and adventure. The rhyme scheme is perfect for this poem. Your poem beautifully shares the bond between a child and their mother, turning a rainy day into a fun filled experience. Well done!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
Comment from Phame Louis
Your poem beautifully captures a child's transition from frustration to joy as they discover the fun of playing in the rain with their mother. The playful rhythm and rhyme enhance the cheerful tone, making it engaging and relatable. Consider tightening the rhythm in a few places for smoother flow, but overall, it's a delightful portrayal of finding joy in unexpected moments.
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Your poem beautifully captures a child's transition from frustration to joy as they discover the fun of playing in the rain with their mother. The playful rhythm and rhyme enhance the cheerful tone, making it engaging and relatable. Consider tightening the rhythm in a few places for smoother flow, but overall, it's a delightful portrayal of finding joy in unexpected moments.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
